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The first time I meditated. Sometimes, I simply wake up feeling sad. It happens mostly when I have a bad dream, which has been occurring more frequently these days. When it happens, I try to cheer myself up by doing something that I enjoy, such as reading, or painting. However, there are days when I feel not only sad but also a strange confusion inside my mind. It feels like I'm inside a crowded room with people yelling all the time, and I cannot hear my thoughts. The last time it happened, I felt I needed to do something in order to cleanse my mind. And so, I grabbed my scooter and rode it to nowhere. Then, all of a sudden, I realized I was at the beach. I think I unconsciously ended up there because it's one of my favorite places to go. I walked towards the beach sand, sat down, and closed my eyes. My mind was empty at that time, and I could only hear the sounds of the waves. My mind was no longer confused. I meditated for the first time in my life, and I felt energized again.

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The first time I meditated.

Sometimes, I simply wake up feeling sad. It happens mostly when I have a bad dream, which has been happening a lot more frequently these days. When it happens, I try to cheer myself up by doing something that I enjoy, such as reading, or painting. However, there are days when I feel not only sad but also this  a strange confusion inside my mind. It feels like I'm inside a crowded room with people yelling all the time, and I cannot hear my thoughts.
The last time it happened, I felt like  I needed to do something in order to cleanse my mind. And so, I grabbed my scooter and rode it to wherever it took me (the word nowhere didnt make much sense). Then, all of a sudden, I realized I was at the beach. I think I unconsciously ended up there because it's one of my favorite places to go. I walked towards the beach sand, sat down, and closed my eyes. My mind was empty at that time, and I heard only the sounds of the waves. My mind was no longer confused. I meditated for the first time in my life, and I felt energized again.


<3 <3 <3 Im happy youre in a better place now. Besides that though you did a wonderful job writing this #arrasou 

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The first time I meditated.

Sometimes, I simply wake up feeling sad. It happens mostly when I have a bad dream, which has been occurring more frequently these days. When it happens, I try to cheer myself up by doing something that I enjoy, such as reading or painting. However, there are days when I feel not only sad, but also a strange confusion inside my mind. It feels like I'm inside a crowded room with people yelling all the time, and I cannot hear my thoughts.
The last time it happened, I felt I needed to do something in order to cleanse my mind. And so, I grabbed my scooter and rode it to nowhere. Then, all of a sudden, I realized I was at the beach. I think I unconsciously ended up there because it's one of my favorite places to go. So, I walked towards the beach sand, I sat down, and closed my eyes. My mind was empty at that time, and I could only hear the sounds of the waves. My mind wasn't no longer confused anymore. I meditated for the first time in my life, and I felt energized again.


^^Great job, Taynana!! Your English is very good and contained very little and minor errors, so you might see that some of my corrections are merely suggestions for better flow. Good luck, and keep up the good work!

P.S. I imagined your story in my mind, and it was very beautiful and calming--loved the read :)

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The first time I meditated.

Sometimes I simply wake up feeling sad. It happens mostly when I have a bad dream, which is occurring more frequently these days. When it happens, I try to cheer myself up doing something that I enjoy, such as reading, or painting. However, there are days that I feel not only sad but also a strange confusion inside my mind. It feels like I'm inside a crowded room with people yelling all the time and I cannot hear my thoughts.
The last time it happened, I felt I needed to do something in order to cleanse  my mind. So, I grabbed my scooter and rode it to nowhere. When Then I realized I was at the beach. I think I unconsciously ended up there because it's one of my favorite places to go. So, I walked to reach the beach sand, I sat down and closed my eyes. My mind was empty at that time, and I could only hear the sounds of the waves. My mind wasn't confused anymore. I meditated at   for  the first time of my life, and I felt energized again.
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The first time I meditated.

Sometimes, I simply wake up feeling sad. It happens mostly when I have a bad dream, and this type of dreams which has been occurring more frequently these days. When it happens, I try to cheer myself up by doing something (that) I enjoy, such as reading and painting. However, there are days when I not only feel not only sad, I  but also have a strange confusion running inside my head mind. It feels like as if I'm inside a crowded room with people who are yelling all the time, so much so that  and I cannot hear my own thoughts.
The last time it happened, I felt I needed to do something (in order) to clear/cleanse my mind. And So, I grabbed my scooter and rode it to nowhere in particular. Then, all of a sudden, I realized that I was at a the beach. I think I had unconsciously wanted to end up ended up there, because it's one of my favorite places to go to. I walked towards the sandy beach sand, sat down and closed my eyes. My mind was empty at that time; and I could only hear the sounds of the waves. My mind was no longer confused. I meditated for the first time in my life, and I felt energized again.
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The first time I meditated.

Sometimes, I simply wake up feeling sad. It happens mostly when I have a bad dream, which has been occurring more (occurs) frequently these days. When(ever) it happens, I try to cheer(ing) myself up by doing something that (things) I enjoy, such as reading, or painting. However, there are days when I feel not only sad but also a strange confusion inside my mind. It feels like I'm inside a crowded room with people yelling (shouting) all the time, and I cannot hear my thoughts.
The last time it (this) happened, I felt I needed to do something in order to cleanse (free) my mind. And so, I grabbed my scooter and rode it (without a destination in mind) to nowhere. Then, all of a sudden, I realized I was at the beach. I think I unconsciously ended up there because it's one of my favorite places to go. I walked towards the beach sand, sat down, and closed my eyes. My mind was empty at that time, and I could only hear the sounds of the waves. My mind was no longer confused. I meditated for the first time in my life, and I felt energized again.

Hello Taynana. You have got a really nice writing style. Please keep it up.

Cheers!

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