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Historians and sinologists converge by considering that the Chinese civilization impresses not only by its longevity, but also and mainly by its economic and political greatness throughout a large part of history while compared to others ancient and contemporany civilizations.
Francis Bacon has observed that the world in the 600s recreated itself through powder, press and magnets. However, he has not mentioned that these three things were invented in China hundreds of years before.
Despite of its status of the most flourishing economy in the world throughout three centuries, in 1829, it was yet possible to glimpse the first signs of the sudden fall which would diminish the Chinese economy if compared to the European rivals next century. After several decades of relative fall, the industrial production in China in 1930s was lower than in Belgium, while its equipments and devices production was not bigger than in a state in the Midwest of the USA.
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Historians and sinologists converge by considering (“both consider” sounds more natural to me) that *Chinese civilization is impressive not only because of its longevity, but also and mainly because of its economic and political greatness throughout a large part of history in comparison to other ancient and contemporary civilizations.
Francis Bacon *observed that the world in the 600s recreated itself (“was transformed” is what I would say) through powder, press and magnets. However, he did not mention that these three things were invented in China hundreds of years before.
Despite of its status as the most flourishing economy in the world for three centuries, in 1829, it was already possible to glimpse the first signs of the sudden fall that would diminish the Chinese economy in comparison to * European rivals in the next century. After several decades of relative fall, the industrial production in China in 1930s was lower than in Belgium, while its equipment and device production was not bigger than in a state (smaller than a state in the US Midwest) in the Midwest * US
Overall really good! Just a few spots where, although what you're saying is not wrong, I would usually say it in a different way. Keep up the great work!
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