I cooked dinner
I cooked tonjiru for dinner yesterday.
tonjiru is japanese for miso soup with pork and vegetables.
first I chopped pork,a half head of cabbage,sweet potato,spring onion,and tofu.
second I put pork,spring onion,and tofu in the pot.
and grilled them for a few minutes.
third I put two liters of water,one tablespoon Japanese soup stock and rest of vegetables in the pot and heat for ten minutes.
lastly mix it with miso.
it was okay.
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I cooked dinner
I cooked tonjiru for dinner yesterday.Tonjiru is Japanese for miso soup with pork and vegetables.
First I chopped some pork, (space)half (of) a head of cabbage,(space) sweet potato,(space)spring onion,(space)and tofu.
Second, I put the pork,(space) the spring onion,(space) and the tofu into the pot pan. (a pot is not usually used for grilling because it is deep, you might make soup or boil noodles in a pot. A pan is used to grill/sauté things because it is shallow and flat)
Then I and grilled them for a few minutes.
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pan, and then I grilled them for a few minutes. (The reason for this is because you can either end the sentence after pan with a period or you can use a comma & use "and". You can't start a sentence with the word "and". =]
Third, I put added two liters of water,(space)one tablespoon Japanese soup stock, and rest of vegetables in the pot. Then I and heated them for ten minutes.
Last I mixed it with the miso.
It was okay.
A couple of grammar tips =]
1) In English, you always capitalize the first letter of the sentence.
2) after a comma, you need to put a space before the next word
ex) vegetables, Japanese soup stock, and the rest of the vegetables.
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I cooked dinner
I cooked tonjiru for dinner yesterday.tonjiru is japanese for miso soup with pork and vegetables.
first I chopped some pork ,a half head of cabbage, sweet potato, spring onion(no need for a comma)and tofu.
second, I put the pork, spring onion(no need for a comma)and tofu in the pot (no punctuation here)
and grilled it for a few minutes.
third, I put two liters of water,one tablespoon Japanese soup stock and the rest of the vegetables in the pot and heated it for ten minutes.
lastly I mixed it with miso.
it was okay.
Very good! Don't forget to capitalize the first letter of the first word in a sentence.
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