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Our world is very huge and exciting. So I really love to travel. Unfortunately, I haven't been in many places. I hope I will often travel in my future life.
But I have already visited one magnificent country, which isn't like the others.This is unique, mysterious, ancient Thailand!
I want to tell you about some Thailand's holidays and festivals. Because one of the main Thai holidays celebrated recently.
Songkran
The Thai New Year's Day is 13 April every year, but the holiday period includes 14–15 April as well
Making a splash - celebrating Songkran
The most famous aspect of the Songkran celebrations is the throwing of water. Indeed, Songkran is often known as the Thai Water Festival. The custom originates from spring cleaning aspect of Songkran. Part of the ritual was the cleaning of images of Buddha. Using the 'blessed' water that cleaned the images to soak other people is seen as a way of paying respect and bring good fortune.
It also doesn't hurt that April is the hottest part of the year in Thailand, so being soaked is a refreshing escape from the heat and humidity.
Chiang Mai Flower Festival
The northern Thai city of Chiang Mai celebrates the annual Chiang Mai Flower Festival at the beginning of February.The floral displays are wonderful, but that is only a part of what makes the weekend so memorable. Parades, music concerts, cultural displays and street markets combine to make this one of Thailand’s most colourful and family-friendly festivals which can be enjoyed by people of all ages.
Miss Chiang Mai Flower Festival Edit
Many of the girls atop the gaily decorated floats and carriages are candidates for the Miss Chiang Mai Flower Festival competition. By late afternoon the really serious part of the festival, choosing the Chiang Mai Flower Festival Queen, begins. Loud rock music and liquid refreshments aid the deliberations. The party goes on into the evening until the Flower Festival Queen is chosen.
Thai festival of the kites
Thai festival of the kites picks up thais and lovers of this sport from over the world. Therefore the interest is not small , in addition to the various competitions and runs of kites of many types and shapes, you can inspect all air masterpieces closer
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Hello ! Can you help me to correct this text?Thanks
Our world is very huge and exciting and I really love to travel. Unfortunately, I haven't been to many places. I hope I will travel often in my future life.I have already visited one magnificent country, which isn't like the others.This is unique, mysterious, ancient Thailand!
I want to tell you about some of Thailand's holidays and festivals because one of the main Thai holidays was celebrated recently.
Songkran
The Thai New Year's Day is 13 April every year, but the holiday period includes 14–15 April as well
Making a splash - celebrating Songkran
The most famous aspect of the Songkran celebrations is the throwing of water. Indeed, Songkran is often known as the Thai Water Festival. The custom originates from the spring cleaning aspect of Songkran. Part of the ritual was the cleaning of images of Buddha. Using the 'blessed' water that cleaned the images to soak other people is seen as a way of paying respect and bring good fortune.
It also doesn't hurt that April is the hottest part of the year in Thailand, so being soaked is a refreshing escape from the heat and humidity.
Chiang Mai Flower Festival
The northern Thai city of Chiang Mai celebrates the annual Chiang Mai Flower Festival at the beginning of February.The floral displays are wonderful, but that is only a part of what makes the weekend so memorable. Parades, music concerts, cultural displays and street markets combine to make this one of Thailand’s most colourful and family-friendly festivals which can be enjoyed by people of all ages.
Miss Chiang Mai Flower Festival Edit
Many of the girls atop the gaily decorated floats and carriages are candidates for the Miss Chiang Mai Flower Festival competition. By late afternoon, the really serious part of the festival, choosing the Chiang Mai Flower Festival Queen begins. Loud rock music and liquid refreshments aid the festivities. The party goes on into the evening until the Flower Festival Queen is chosen.
Thai festival of the kites
Thai festival of the kites picks up Thais and other lovers of this sport from all over the world. The interest in this festival is not small. In addition to the various competitions and flying of kites that are of many types and shapes, you can inspect all air masterpieces closer
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Hello ! Can you help me to correct this text?Thanks
Our world is very huge and exciting so I really love to travel. Unfortunately, I haven't been to many places. I hope I will often travel in the future. However, I have already visited one magnificent country, which isn't like any other. This is the unique, mysterious and ancient Thailand!I want to tell you about some of Thailand's attractions and festivals because one of its main festivals was celebrated recently.
Songkran
The Thai New Year's Day is 13 April, but the holiday period includes 14–15 April as well
Making a splash - celebrating Songkran
The most famous aspect of the Songkran celebrations is the throwing of water. Indeed, Songkran is often known as the Thai Water Festival. The custom originates from the spring cleaning aspect of Songkran. Part of the ritual was the cleaning of images of Buddha. Using the 'blessed' water that cleaned the images to soak other people is seen as a way of paying respect and bringing good fortune.
It also doesn't hurt that April is the hottest part of the year in Thailand, so being soaked is a refreshing escape from the heat and humidity.
Chiang Mai Flower Festival.
The northern Thai city of Chiang Mai celebrates the annual Chiang Mai Flower Festival at the beginning of February. The floral displays are wonderful, but that is only a part of what makes the weekend so memorable. Parades, music concerts, cultural displays and street markets combine to make this one of Thailand’s most colourful and family-friendly festivals which can be enjoyed by people of all ages.
Miss Chiang Mai Flower Festival.
Many of the girls on top of the gaily decorated floats and carriages are candidates for the Miss Chiang Mai Flower Festival competition. By late afternoon the really serious part of the festival, choosing the Chiang Mai Flower Festival Queen, begins. Loud rock music and liquid refreshments aid the deliberations. The party goes on into the evening until the Flower Festival Queen is chosen.
Thai festival of the kites
Thai festival of the kites picks up Thais and lovers of this sport from over the world. Therefore the interest is not small , in addition to the various competitions and runs of kites of many types and shapes, you can inspect all air masterpieces closer ...?
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