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IELTS Letter: Bad service at a shop IELTS Letter: Bad service at a shop You recently had your computer fixed at the local computer store however you are not pleased with the service you received. Write a letter to the store manager. In the letter - describe the situation - explain why you are dissatisfied - say what you want the manager to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, My dear Sir, I regret to inform you that I am not pleased with the service I received. My computer has acted up again. One month ago I noticed that my computer became slower and slower. Firstly I decide to bring it to your service. The repairing was taking a long time- two week. When I obtained computer, it worked again well, but after two weeks I also began paying attentions on the computer performance, on the other words it works slowly again. I am appealing you, help me. I do not have enough money to buy new computer and of course the service warranty is still up to now. Could you be kind to mend it in a hurry? Do not compel me to write a special documents to trade service center, where I can get attorney help. Please do it well. I hope that I am continue to rely on your interest. Sincerely yours, Paul Supryatkin.

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IELTS Letter: Bad service at a shop

IELTS Letter: Bad service at a shop

You recently had your computer fixed at the local computer store however you are not pleased with the service you received.
Write a letter to the store manager. In the letter
- describe the situation
- explain why you are dissatisfied
- say what you want the manager to do
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam,

I regret to inform you that I am not pleased with the service I received at your shop. My computer has failed again.

A month ago I noticed that my computer became slower and slower. Firstly, I decided to bring it to your service. The repairing had taken two weeks.  When I received my computer, it worked again well, but after two weeks I also have noticed  that my computer performance worsened - in the other words it started performing  slowly again.

I am writing to you to ask to take some steps to repair it. I do not have enough money to buy a computer; besides the service warranty is still valid. Could you be kindly to mend it in a hurry as soon as possible? 

Please do not force me to submit complain letter compel me to write a special documents to a trade service center, where I can get attorney help. Please do it well.  I hope my request will be taken seriously and responded adequately. 


I hope that I am continue to rely on your interest.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. 
Sincerely yours,


Paul Supryatkin.

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IELTS Letter: Bad service at a shop

IELTS Letter: Bad service at a shop

You recently had your computer fixed at the local computer store however you are not pleased with the service you received.
Write a letter to the store manager. In the letter
- describe the situation
- explain why you are dissatisfied
- say what you want the manager to do
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,

My dear Sir,
Dear Sir or Madam,

Would be better to describe preposition first and explain your attitude to it.
I regret to inform you that I am not pleased with the service I received. My computer has acted up again. (sounds unnatural, imho)

One month ago I noticed that my computer became slower and slower. Firstly I decide to bring it to your service. The repairing was taking repair took a long time - two weeks. When I obtained computer it (we address it before, so to avoid repetition I'd replace it to pronoun) back, it worked again well, but after two weeks I also began paying attentions on the computer performance, on the other words it works slowly again.

I am appealing you, help me. I do not have enough money to buy a new computer and of course, it should still be covered by the service warranty is still up to now. Could you be kind to mend fix it in a hurry? Do not compel me to write a special documents to trade service center, where I can get attorney (a lower, really?) help. Please do it well.

I hope that I am continue to rely on your interest.

Sincerely yours,
Paul Supryatkin.

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Не в той секции разместили: нужно выбирать "английский", потому что сейчас Ваш текст в русскоязычной секции.

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