Women Sara it's 40. She's a successful business woman. She doesn't chose to be single, but she put career on the first place. She's not ugly, she's not stupid, she's not bad woman. And, however, she s

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Women Sara it's 40. She's a successful business woman. She doesn't chose to be single, but she put career on the first place. She's not ugly, she's not stupid, she's not bad woman. And, however, she spend her evenings with company of good books or her friends. But she never complain about that, because is her life, and lives how she wants. Ioana it's 20. Is the second year when she fail her exam at university. Let's be honest, is not that easy. She studied so much for a positive result, but was in vain. She's despaired, but not dissappointed. Accept defeat with discretion. Although, secretly, it sometimes leaves itself weakened and ... gives free to the tears. But she quickly wipes them, dresses her most beautiful dress, takes her most beautiful smile, and walks to a new day. Anca is between two ages. Already at the second divorce. With two children, each one of a marriage. Being a single mother today is a continual challenge. You have to play a double role on all life. But Anca knows her value. She accepts and forgives her past. But, above all, she does not regret it. Without it, she would not have been the one she was now: a determined, courageous and at the same time gentle woman with two beautiful kids. Anyone can have a destiny similar to that of Sara, Ioana, or Anca. Or, why not, one much more complicated ... or much happier. Does not matter. All these women are unique, they are wonderful, they are perfect in their imperfection.

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Women

Sara it's is 40. She's a successful business woman. She doesn't chose choose to be single, but she put her career on the first. place. She's not ugly, she's not stupid, and she's not a bad woman. And, however, However, she spends her evenings with in the company of good books or her friends. But she never complains about that, because this is her life, and she lives how she wants.

Ioana it's is 20. Is She was in the second year when she failed her exams at university. Let's be honest, it is not isn't that easy. She studied so much hard for a positive result, but it was all in vain. She's despaired, but was not disappointed. Accept She accepted defeat with discretion. Although, secretly, it she sometimes leaves itself feels weakened and ... gives free to the tears begin to fall. But she quickly wipes them away, dresses in her most beautiful dress, takes puts on her most beautiful smile, and walks to embraces a new day.

Anca is between two ages. Already at the on her second divorce. With two children, each one of from a different marriage. Being a single mother today is a continual challenge. You have to play a double role on all in every aspect of your life. But Anca knows her value. She accepts and forgives her past. But, above all, she does not regret it. Without it, she would not have been the one be the woman she is today was now is: a determined, courageous, and at the same time, gentle woman with two beautiful kids.

Anyone can have a destiny similar to that of Sara, Ioana, or Anca. Or, why not, perhaps one much more complicated ... or much happier. Does not It doesn't matter. All these women are unique, they are all wonderful, they are and each one is perfect in their imperfection.

Some changes are a question of style and not mistakes. I've tried my best to make it sound perfect and natural.

there is a Chinese movie named 20 30 40 which is quite similar to the story in your essay. It also tells three women's story, one is 20 years old, one is 30 years old and the other one is 40.

Women

Sara is 40. She's a successful business woman. She did not chose to be single, but she chose career first. She's not ugly, she's not stupid, she's not a bad woman. She spends her evenings with the company of good books or friends. She never complains about it because it's her life, and she lives they way she wants it.
Loana is 20. She is in her second year when she failed her exam at the university. Let's be honest, is not that easy. She studied so much for a positive result, but it was in vain. She despaired, but she's not disappointed. Accepted defeat with humility. Secretly though, it sometimes leaves her weak and makes her burst to the tears but she quickly wipes them, dresses her most beautiful dress, takes her most beautiful smile, and walks to a new day.
Anca is between two ages. Already on her second divorce. With two children, one for each marriage. Being a single mother today is a continual challenge. You have to play a double role on all life. But Anca knows her value. She accepts and forgives her past. But, above all, she does not regret it. Without it, she would not be what she is now, a determined, courageous and at the same time gentle woman with two beautiful kids.
Anyone can have a destiny similar to that of Sara, Loana or Anca. Each one much more complicated ... or much happier. Does not matter. All these women are unique, they are wonderful, they are perfect in their imperfection.

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