A brief description of myself aimed to Carla recognizes me at the train station
Hi, Carla. How are you? I am eager to see you at the train station later. In fact I had been thinking about our meeting and it dawned on me that, considering you don't know me yet, you won't recognize me! In other words, unless I describe myself to you beforehand, our meeting could be frustrated... So, here it goes a brieaf depiction of how I will be in the occasion: when you see a small man, physically irrelevant, with a big bluish aura of unconditional love, this will be me. Just kidding! I'm a man of 1,80 meter height, with dark brown hair and brown eyes. Probably I will be wearing a black suit and a blue tie. I think that, besides my marvelous grin, it is enouth to you recognize me. By the way, I will arrive at the train station at 5 a.m. See you!
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Henrique, this is almost perfect. Some very small items: 1. Title: "aimed to Carla, to help her recognize me at . .. ." 2) "In fact [COMMA], I . . ." 3) "frustrating," not frustrated. You and Carla (the people) are frustrated. Things (like meetings" are "frustrating.". 4) "So, here goes a brief . . ." (small errors). 5) I would delete "in the occasion." I understand your meaning, but Americans don't use that phrase. 6) "1,80 meter" -- again, if your audience is American, use feet and inches. 7) "enough" (spelling) "for you to recognize . . " (not "to you recognize"). But honestly, these are tiny errors. This is a nice paragraph.
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Very In- depth.
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