20 love poems and one song desperate (Author: Pablo Neruda)
Poem 15
First paragraph
I like when you shut up because you are like absent, and you listening me since far, and my voice do you not touch you, it seems that your eyes would have flown away, and it seem that one kiss would closed your mouth.
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20 love poems and one song desperate (Author: Pablo Neruda)
Poem 15First paragraph
I like when you (shut up ) are silent because it is as if you are (like) absent, and you (listening me since) hear me from afar, and my voice does (you) not touch you, it seems that your eyes (would) have flown away, and it seems that one kiss would close(d) your mouth.
This sentence could be written either:
and it seems that one kiss would close(d) your mouth.
Or:
and it seems that one kiss closed your mouth.
Well done Karina :)
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