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Some people believe that humans should not eat meat. Do you agree?
Many people think that humans should not eat meat because they believe that if the persons consume this type of food, more animals die for cause of this.
First, I would like to explain my reasons of because I don’t agree with that idea. For example, when some people have stopped eating meat, they have been drinking vitamins because their body need that vitamin to live.
On the other hand, many vegetarians have decided be it because they believe that of this way they protect a the animals. However, some vegetarians then wear clothes made of animal hide.
In conclusion,I think that the people should eat all type of foodstuffs to have a life healthy. It is very important! But, if they decide don’t eat meat for protect animals, they neither will wear clothes of hide.
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Can you correct my mistakes, please?
Some people believe that humans should not eat meat. Do you agree?Many people think that humans should not eat meat because they believe that if the persons consumes this type of food, more animals will die for cause of due to this. (It's better to use other words like as, due to, etc, that can replace 'because' if you are using the word multiple times, as it may sound repetitive if used too often.)
First, I would like to explain my reasons of because why I don’t agree with that idea. For example, when some people have stopped eating meat, they have been drinking vitamins because their bodies need that vitamin vitamins to live.
On the other hand, many vegetarians have decided be it not to eat meat because they believe that of this way they protect a the animals. However, some vegetarians then wear clothes made of animal hide (skin* would be okay, more commonly used).
In conclusion,I think that the people should eat all type of foodstuffs to have a life healthy. It is very important! But, if they decide don’t not to eat meat to for protect animals, they neither will wear clothes made of hide.
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