My favorite band I want to talk about my favorite singer. My favorite singer is Freddie Mercury. He was a big singer with a big voice. He sang in a famous band called Queen. I love his songs for examp

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My favorite band I want to talk about my favorite singer. My favorite singer is Freddie Mercury. He was a big singer with a big voice. He sang in a famous band called Queen. I love his songs for example: Somebody to love, Under pressure, crazy little thing called love and my favorite song from Queen is Bohemian Rhapsody because this song mix several rhythms like opera and rock. If I had chosed in a special date to born it had been 80´s .

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My favorite band

I want to talk about my favorite singer. My favorite singer is Freddie Mercury. He was a big singer with a big voice. He sang in a famous band called Queen. I love his songs for example: Somebody to love, Under pressure, crazy little thing called love and my favorite song from Queen is Bohemian Rhapsody because this song mix several rhythms like opera and rock.
If I had chosed in a special date to born it had been 80´s .

Great paragraph. I love Queen too :)

Only two suggestions : favourite (English spelling), favorite (American spelling).

And last sentence: If I had to choose a date to be born, it would be in the 80s.

My favorite band

I want to talk about my favorite singer. My favorite singer is Freddie Mercury. He was a big singer with a big voice [1]. He sang in a famous band called Queen. I love his songs; for example: Somebody to love, Under pressure, crazy little thing called love and my favorite song from Queen is Bohemian Rhapsody because this song mixes several rhythms/styles/genres like opera and rock.
If I could have chosen had chosed in a special date to be born into, it would be the had been 80´s .

[1] He was a great singer with a great voice might reflect the message more clearly. He was a big singer could mean that he was a fat singer.

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