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The pursuit of happyness The film that I'd would like to review is The Pursuit of Happyness. This film is based on a true story of Chris Gardner, a salesman struggling to build a better future for yourself and his son of 5 years old. The main theme of the film is never give up of yours dreams, although a lot of difficulties can appear, if you hard work with focus and determination you'll eliminate them and achieve your goal. It's one of the best film that I've ever seen and certainly I'd recommend one of the most uplifting films of all times.

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The Pursuit of Happyness

The film that I'd would like to review is The Pursuit of Happyness. This film is based on a the true story of Chris Gardner, a salesman struggling to build a better future for yourself himself and his son of 5 years old son.


The main theme of the film is to never give up of yours dreams. Although a lot of many difficulties may can appear, if you hard work and have with focus and determination, you'll eliminate these difficulties and achieve your goal.


It's one of the best films that I've ever seen and I'd certainly I'd recommend it as one of the most uplifting films of all times.


Nice work on this one :) 

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The film that I'd would like to review is The Pursuit of Happyness. This film is based on a the true story of Chris Gardner, a salesman struggling to build a better future for your himself and his son of 5 years old.

The main theme of the film is to never give up of yours dreams, although a lot of difficulties can appear, if you hard work with focus and determination you'll eliminate them and achieve your goal.
It's one of the best films that I've ever seen and certainly I'd recommend I'd certainly recommend it as it is one of the most uplifting films of all times.


If you have any questions feel free to ask. This was pretty good, with only very minor grammar errors. 

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