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Watched a french movie I watched a french movie today. The title is "La Fille Unconnue" or "The Unknown Girl". The story is simple. But, it is also interesting. The movie treats a problem which every one of us must face at a certain point of our life. It is how we behave when we commit a irrecoverable mistake. There is no one who never commit mistake. Then, the important thing is what we can do after the mistake. This movie shows us an option we can take in such a situation.

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Watched a french movie

I watched a french movie today. The title iswas "La Fille Unconnue" or "The Unknown Girl". The story iswas simple, but it iswas also interesting. The movie treatssolved a problem which every one of us must face at a certain point of our life, which is how we behave when we commitmake an irrecoverable mistake. [There is no one who never commitmakes a mistake.] Then, tThe important thing is what we can do after thethat mistake. This movie shows us an option we can take in such a situation.

[Everyone makes mistakes.] This is simple and expresses the same as your sentence.  However, your sentence uses a double-negative which can sometimes get difficult to read.


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Explanation:  All of your usages of "is" needed to be "was" because you are speaking about the movie you watched in the past.  So anything that is becomes was.  If you started with "I'm watching a french movie today." then all of your "is" are OK.  This can mean you are watching the movie right now, or be a statement that you are definitely watching a french movie today, but perhaps not now.  "Commit a mistake" is not incorrect, it is just far less common than "make a mistake."  If you change "mistake" with "error", commit becomes a bit more common.

Hope that helps.  Keep up the good work.

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