我申请在中国学习一学期太极拳的孔子学院奖学金_第二部分

This year I passed the HSK 4. However, in order to understand what Chinese people write, what they say, etc, this level is not enough. I  continue to study new words, read, listen, speak, in Chinese. The motivation I receive from my teacher in the Confucious Institute in Barcelona is very big. So is the help of my Chinese friend in Spain. I really hope that in the future I can speak much better chinese than now. If I have the chance to live in China for one semester, I am sure I can achieve it.
今年我通过了HSK 4 考试. 但是, 为了看得懂中国人写的什么, 听得懂他们说什么等,这个水平不够. 我会继续学习生词, 阅读, 听力, 口语. 在巴塞罗那孔子学院老师给了我很多鼓励. 我中国朋友帮助也很大. 我很希望将来我能够说一口好多一点儿的中文（我的中文能够说得更好）. 如果我能在中国生活一个学期, 这个目的地我一定能达到（我一定能够达到这个目的）.(Actually, 目标 is better here if you want to express 'goal'. 目的 more or less has negative meaning. Similar as 'purpose' in English)
The movements inTaiqi look to me very beautiful. Long time ago I tried it. I remember my Spanish teacher of Taiqi was not very patient with his students. My believe is that his knowledge of Taiqi was just so so. Soon after I gave up the learning of Taiqi. 25 years later, there are still few people who practice Taiqi in Spain. Teachers of Taiqi even fewer. I would really like to learn Taiqi. Back in Spain I could teach it to others as a voluntary teacher, during weekends. For example, where I live, there are public facilities where some people teach others painting, drawing, singing, etc. These are activites related to art and culture. These activities are normally free, or only a small fee is required. I am sure that if Taiqi was taught the same way, it would be highly popular.
太极拳的动作看上去很美. 我很久以前打过一点. 我记得我的西班牙太极拳的老师不耐烦, 但是知识也还可以. 不过我早就放弃了. 大概二十五左右年以后会打太极拳的西班牙人还是不多. 会教打太极拳的西班牙人更少. 我很想在中国好学习好太极拳, 回来西班牙后我周末要教别人. 比如说, 在我的地区有些人自愿教别人画画, 唱歌, 根等等跟文化, 艺术有关的活动. 这些活动一般都是免费的或者得交小费. 在那儿资源教太极拳一定收到很受欢迎!.

Dear David,

Your Chinese is actually pretty good. Although there are some minor problems in grammar and vocabulary, I have no difficulty in understanding what you want to express.

Best wishes.

Irene

我申请在中国学习一学期太极拳的孔子学院奖学金_第二部分

This year I passed the HSK 4. However, in order to understand what Chinese people write, what they say, etc, this level is not enough. I continue to study new words, read, listen, speak, in Chinese. The motivation I receive from my teacher in the Confucious Institute in Barcelona is very big. So is the help of my Chinese friend in Spain. I really hope that in the future I can speak much better chinese than now. If I have the chance to live in China for one semester, I am sure I can achieve it.
今年我通过了HSK 4. 但是, 为了看得懂中国人写的, 听得懂他们说什么等,这个水平不够. 我继续学习生词, 阅读, 听力, 口语. 在巴塞罗那孔子学院老师的鼓励很大. 我中国朋友帮助也很大. 我很希望将来我会说一口好多一点儿的中文. （我希望将来我的中文说得比现在更好）如果我能在中国生活一个学期, 这个目的地（use“目标”much better ，and “目的地”，“目的”are two different words,“目的地” is a destination, the place that someone is going to, “目的”is something that you hope to achieve in the future. ）我一定能达到.
The movements inTaiqi look to me very beautiful. Long time ago I tried it. I remember my Spanish teacher of Taiqi was not very patient with his students. My believe is that his knowledge of Taiqi was just so so. Soon after I gave up the learning of Taiqi. 25 years later, there are still few people who practice Taiqi in Spain. Teachers of Taiqi even fewer. I would really like to learn Taiqi. Back in Spain I could teach it to others as a voluntary teacher, during weekends. For example, where I live, there are public facilities where some people teach others painting, drawing, singing, etc. These are activites related to art and culture. These activities are normally free, or only a small fee is required. I am sure that if Taiqi was taught the same way, it would be highly popular.
太极拳的动作看上去很美. 我很久以前打过一点. 我记得我的西班牙太极拳的老师不耐烦(耐心), 好像知识也还可以（一般般）. 我早就放弃了. 二十五左右年以后会打太极拳的西班牙人还是不多. 会教打太极拳的西班牙人更少. 我很想在中国好学习太极拳, 回来西班牙后我周末要教别人. 比如说, 在我的地区有些人自愿教别人画画, 唱歌, 根文化, 艺术有关的活动. 这些活动一般都是免费的或者得交小费. 在那儿资源教太极拳一定要收到很欢迎!.