Corrections · 3
Ayumi-san,
Your answers are good. But sometimes your answers depart from the questions. See my notes below:
Job skills
-What jobs are in demand these days?(The questions asks what jobs are in demand. You give a good answer, but you begin your answer with "I think workers who . . ." So instead of "workers" I think you should say "jobs" to more directly answer the question. I re-wrote your answer below).
I think workers who use the computer are demand, for example, the system engineers. We cannot ignore the computer. It has spread broadly into society.
My version: I think jobs involving computer skills, such as system engineers, are in demand these days. We cannot ignore the computer. It's use has spread throughout society, so there are many opportunities for people with computer skills.
-What skills do people increasingly need?
(In this question, also, you give a good, thoughtful answer. But it doesn't directly answer the question "what skills to we need?" So, it would be good to add a sentence telling what skills people need that computers and robots can't provide. Possibly jobs involving mental health care, art and design skills and other creative skills like writing).
Our The skills we will need in the future is are those that cannot being able to do performed by AI robots. I predict several jobs will disappears due to their skills roles being performed more efficiently by robots.
If you have opinions, let me know! Thank you!
Job skills
-What jobs are in demand these days?I think workers who use the computers are in demand, for example, the systems engineers. We cannot ignore the computer. It has spread broadly into society.
-What skills do people increasingly need?
Our The skills we need in the future are those that an is not being able to do by AI robot would not be able to do. I predict several jobs disappears due to their skills.
If you have opinions, let me know! Thank you!
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