Go to the hill
I think go to hill is a great entertainment, because it`s a great opportunity to be with nature. I love climbing to the top, and drink beer with my friends. Sometimes we do parties in the hill, we have to take the bears to the top, it´s very hard, but we had a great time. We got off the hill in the middle of the night.
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Going to the hills
I think going to hills / hiking is a great means of entertainment / a great way to enjoy oneself, because it`s a great opportunity to be with nature. I love climbing to the top, and drinking beer with my friends. Sometimes we do have parties on the hill, and when we have to take the beers to the top, it´s very hard, but we usually have a great time. We got off leave the hill in the middle of the night.Hello Mauricio, Great attempt! My corrections are in yellow while my suggestions are in blue. Be sure to always stick to one tense unless the text you are writing has a flashback or a jump in time. In addition, be careful with homophones like "beer" and "bear", they mean two totally different things. Finally, commas never appear before the word "but" and only before the word "and" if there is a long list of ideas or concepts.
If you would like any further assistance, do not hesitate to send me a message.
Que tenga un buen día.
Cordialmente,
Jer
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