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Is the fixed punishment approach the solution to crime? Some say "Justice is blind", meaning that all of us should be treated in the same way by the system, and that the same crime should have the same sentence. Nevertheless, I think there are certain sitautions in each crime which must be taken in consideration during the trial and in the final sentence; and that can alleviate or toghten the penalty. It is obvious that not always a crime implies a previous planning by the person commiting it. The legal term man´s slaughter is an example of a crime committed without intention, and for me it is clear that the sentence shoulde be lesser compared to the killing of a person that was planned by the murderer, because in the former case the person who committed the crime had not the intention to do so. On the other hand, I think that for minor offenses the treatment should be the same for both; for the person who hadn´t the intention of breaking the law and for the citizen who did it on purpose and wanted to get away with it. This is bacuse when dealing with minor faults, fixed punishments work as an educational tool for correcting behaviours which are harmful to society. While the fixed punishment is a popular point of view, some of us believe that everyone is different and behaves different in the same situation, therefore this should always be pondered by the jury and the judge. syumming up, the circumstances of a crime, not only the crime, should be considered too.The legal system should take into account if thre was a motivation for the crime or if the assasin planned it. These factors are as relevant as are the existence of extenuations, which make the legal processes so different, even when deal with the death of a human being.

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Is the Fixed Punishment Approach the Solution to Crime?

Some say "Justice is blind," meaning that all of us should be treated in the same way by the system, and that the same crimes should have the same sentences. Nevertheless, I think there are certain sitautions in each crime which must be taken in consideration during the trial and in the final sentence; and that can alleviate or toughen the penalty.
It is obvious that a crime does not always imply planning by the person committing it. The legal term manslaughter is an example of a crime committed without intention, and for me it is clear that the sentence shoulde be lesser compared to the killing of a person that was planned by the murderer, because in the former case the person who committed the crime had not the intention to do so.
On the other hand, I think that for minor offenses the treatment should be the same for both; for both the person who did not have the intention of breaking the law and for the citizen who did it on purpose and wanted to get away with it. This is because when dealing with minor faults, fixed punishments work as an educational tool for correcting behaviours which are harmful to society.
While the fixed punishment is a popular point of view, some of us believe that everyone is different and behaves different in the same situation, therefore this should always be pondered by the jury and the judge.
Summing up, the circumstances of a crime, not only the crime, should be considered too.The legal system should take into account if thre was a motivation for the crime or if the assasin planned it. These factors are as relevant as are the existence of extenuations, which make the legal processes so different, even when dealing with the death of a human being.

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Thanks for correcting my essay! Also thanks for your comment Helen! If you are learning Spanish and need some help with your grammar or conversational skills in this language I would be more than happy to help you. Just let me know.
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Great essay! I agree with you, it's important to consider the circumstances for justice to be done! :)
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Is the fixed punishment approach the solution to crime?

Some say "Justice is blind", meaning that all of us should be treated in the same way by the system, and that the same crime should have the same sentence. Nevertheless, I think there are certain situations in each crime which must be taken into consideration during the trial and in the final sentence; and that can alleviate or toughen the penalty.
It is obvious that a crime does not always imply previous planning by the person committing it. The legal term manslaughter is an example of a crime committed without intention, and for me it is clear that the sentence should be lesser compared to the killing of a person that was planned by the murderer, because in the former case the person who committed the crime did not have the intention to do so.
On the other hand, I think that for minor offences the treatment should be the same for both; for the person who didn't have the intention of breaking the law and for the citizen who did it on purpose and wanted to get away with it. This is because when dealing with minor faults, fixed punishments work as an educational tool for correcting behaviours which are harmful to society.
While the fixed punishment is a popular point of view, some of us believe that everyone is different and behaves differently in the same situation, therefore this should always be pondered by the jury and the judge.
summing up, the circumstances of a crime, not only the crime, should be considered too.The legal system should take into account if there was a motivation for the crime or if the assassin planned it. These factors are as relevant as are the existence of extenuations, which make the legal processes so different, even when dealing with the death of a human being.

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