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Some Problems of Internet With the rapid development of science and technology, internet plays an increasingly important role in people's daily life. It has brought many benefits to us, but has created some serious problems as well. Among many factors which influence my choice, there are three main aspects as follows. Firstly, many people were cheated online. Many lawbreakers utilize internet to cheat for money. Lots of old people were reported that they lost all there savings through internet. Secondly, it's dangerous to date online. many young girls were attracted by online dating. Many of them were killed when they were on date. It's hard to tell whether the person online is good. Lastly, many people were addicted to the internet. They often ignor the beauty around them. We all know that virtual life is meaningless. The true beauty of life is in the real life. In a word, some effective measures should be taken immeadiately. We should use the internet in a correct way. Only in this way can the internet serve us better.

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Some Problems of Internet

With the rapid development of science and technology, the internet plays an increasingly important role in (people's) daily life. It has brought many benefits to us, but has created some serious problems as well.

(Among many factors which influence my choice,) there are three main aspects as follows. Firstly, many people [were]/have been cheated online. Many [lawbreakers]/scammers/fraudsters use/[utilise] the internet to swindle/defraud others/[cheat for money]. [Lots of]/Many old people [were reported to have lost]/that they have lost all theire savings through internet scams/fraud. Secondly, it's dangerous to date online. Many young girls were have been/are attracted by online dating. Many of them were killed when they were on a date. It's hard to tell whether the person online is genuine/sincere/[good]. Lastly, many people were have become/are addicted to the internet. They often ignore the beauty around them. We all know that virtual life is meaningless. The true beauty of life is in reality/the real life.

In a word, some effective measures should be taken immeadiately. We should use the internet in a the correct way/an appropriate way. Only in this way can the internet serve us better.

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