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Ocean Animals One of my friends wrote a speech for his son who is gonna introduce some ocean animals to his classmates: Hello ,I'm happy to make a speech here.My name is xxx.I’m eight.I’m a shinny boy.I like playing basketball and archery. Potatoes are my favorite food, they’re tasty. I like english very much! It’s fun. Today my topic is ocean animals. Many kinds of animals live in the ocean.Most of the ones are mammals,fish,or reptiles. This is a dolphin.The dolphin has a sleek body and a strong tail to swin fast. This is a hammerhead shark,and its head has a very funny shape. This is a California sea lion.It’s smart,noisy,and playful. This is an octopus.It shoots black ink from its body to hide and escape from danger. This is a leatherback turtle,the biggest turtle in the world.It lays eggs on land. The ocean is home to all these animals.Keeping our oceans clean will help keep these animals alive. Thank you! Could you please help check if there is any mistakes or inauthentic expressions , I'm trying to do some corrections first at my side: 1. shinny boy: sunny boy 2. I like playing basketball and archery: I like playing basketball and archery game / I like archery and playing basketball. 3. english: English 4.swin fast: swim fast 5.Most of the ones are mammals,fish,or reptiles. :Most of them are mammals,fishes,or reptiles. Thank you so much for all your help

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Ocean Animals

One of my friends wrote a speech for his son who is gonna introduce some ocean animals to his classmates:

Hello, I'm happy to make a speech here.My name is xxx.I’m eight.I’m a shinny boy.I like playing basketball and archery. Potatoes are my favorite food, they’re tasty. I like english very much! It’s fun.
Today my topic is ocean animals. Many kinds of animals live in the ocean.Most of the ones are mammals, fish, or reptiles.
This is a dolphin.The dolphin has a sleek body and a strong tail to swin fast.
This is a hammerhead shark, and its head has a very funny shape.
This is a California sea lion.It’s smart, noisy, and playful.
This is an octopus.It shoots black ink from its body to hide and escape from danger.
This is a leatherback turtle, the biggest turtle in the world.It lays eggs on land.
The ocean is home to all these animals.Keeping our oceans clean will help keep these animals alive.
Thank you!

Could you please help check if there is any mistakes or inauthentic expressions, I'm trying to do some corrections first at my side:

1. shinny boy: sunny boy -> shiny boy

2. I like playing basketball and archery: I like playing basketball and archery game / I like archery and playing basketball.

3. english: English

4.swin fast: swim fast

5.Most of the ones are mammals,fish,or reptiles. :Most of them are mammals,fishes,or reptiles.

Thank you so much for all your help

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