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On the importance of personal credit From the cartoon given above, we can observe a son ask his father: Daddy, what's your credit score? We can suppose that if the father has a low credit scores, how can he answer his son? The credit score is an important part in our life, we must to be a gooa person who can keep promise and be honest. On if you do that, when your child ask you and you cab say: i am a trustworthy man confrimedly. And also you can educate your child become a better man. Personal credit is very important, so try to keep a high credit score. You will benificial from it.

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On the importance of personal credit

From the cartoon given above, we can observe a son ask his father: Daddy, what's your credit score?
We can suppose that if the father has a low credit scores, how can he answer his son? The credit score is an important part in of our life, we must to be a gooa (is it a typo? :D) good person who can keep a promise and be honest. On if you do that, (remove the comma) when your child asks you and you cab say: I am a trustworthy man confrimedly (a typo again :D) confirmedly. And also you can educate your child to become a better man.

Personal credit is very important, so try to keep a high credit score. You will benificial beneficial from it.

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On the importance of personal credit

From the cartoon above (there is no cartoon), we can observe a son asking his father: "Daddy, what's your credit score?"  We can suppose that if the father has a low credit score, he would be embarrassed to answer his son. A person's credit score is an important part of our life - we must to be a good borrower who can keep a promise and be honest. (I changed good person to good borrower, because some people end up with bad credit scores through no fault of their own. such as unexpected loss of a job or illness). If you do that, then when your child asks you, you can say: "I can confirm that am a trustworthy person". And  you can also educate your child to become a better person. (person is more universal than man). Personal credit is very important, so try to keep a high credit score. You will benefit from it.

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