Help me, plz
My hero
I’m so glad to introduce my favorite singer for you. His name called Eminem. He was born in American. Absolutely I love him so much. When he was a child, his parents were divorced. This thing makes him so sad. When he was 18 years old, he met a very important person called DR.tre, He very love Eminem. Because he think Eminem will be a very famous rapper in the world. He helps him a lot. They’re always study and practice together. In my opinion, Dr.tre like a teacher to help him. One day Eminem jointed a rapper match. Apparently he won the match. And received the champion.
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I’m so glad to introduce my favorite singer for . His name is Eminem. He was born in America. I absolutely love him. When he was a child, his parents got divorced. This made him so sad. When he was 18 years old, he met a very important person, DR.Dre. He loved Eminem.He thought Eminem could be a very famous rapper, so he helped him a lot. They always studied and practicied together. In my opinion, Dr. Dre is like a teacher to him. One day, Eminem joined a rap battle. Apparently he won the battle and was the champion.
Nice progression of thoughts. It was easy to follow. However, my corrections are on VERBS. I noticed you need help with PAST TENSE verbs. I'd love to help you again.
Ms. Morgan
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