I love seaside For me, there always are 360 days I want to go to seaside to see the ocean. Where I live doesn’t near any ocean and it makes me fascinated with oceans. Last year I went to the Weizhou i

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I love seaside For me, there always are 360 days I want to go to seaside to see the ocean. Where I live doesn’t near any ocean and it makes me fascinated with oceans. Last year I went to the Weizhou island in Guangxi province of china. I really like there just because it is an island, you know, an ISLAND! The sunshine, the beach, the bule water and tropical breeze, they made me feel like in heaven. And the seafood are so fresh and delicious that I ate at least 1.5 kilo shrimps in 2 days. Sweet and yummy~~ I plan to go to a place near seaside this year. I have not decided where to go, maybe in china, may be in Thailand, I want to feel like in heaven again. You can’t understand the feeling unless you live in a place without beach , and where is often cloudy. I still love the place I live, it is my hometown after all.:)

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I just can not comprehend your heaven-like feeling because I live next to the seaside. But I do love beach, sand and ocean breeze!

I love the seaside

For me, there are always 360 days when I want to go to the seaside to see the ocean. Where I live isn’t near any ocean and it makes me fascinated with oceans. Last year I went to Weizhou Island in the Guangxi province of China. I really liked it there just because it is an island, you know, an ISLAND! The sunshine, the beach, the blue water and tropical breeze, they made me feel like I was in heaven. And the seafood was so fresh and delicious that I ate at least 1.5 kilos of shrimps in 2 days. Sweet and yummy~~
I plan to go to a place near the seaside this year. I have not decided where to go, maybe in China, maybe in Thailand, I want to feel like I am in heaven again.
You can’t understand the feeling unless you live in a place without a beach , and where it is often cloudy.
I still love the place I live, it is my hometown after all.:)

Hello Dolcorn,

Nice article and just a few corrections, remember that all countries and places begin with a capital letter and to use 'the' before name + province as it is a definite thing.

Best wishes

Bob

I love the seaside

For me, there are always are 360 days when I want to go to the seaside to see the ocean. Where I don't live doesn’t near any ocean and it makes me fascinated with them oceans. Last year I went to the Weizhou island in the Guangxi province of China. I really liked it there just because it is an island, you know, an ISLAND! The sunshine, the beach, the bule (??) water and tropical breeze, they made me feel like in heaven. Also, And the seafood wasare so fresh and delicious that I ate at least 1.5 kilo of shrimps in 2 days. Sweet and yummy~~
I plan to go to a place near the seaside this year. I have not decided where to go, maybe in China, maybe in Thailand. I want to feel like in heaven again.
You can’t understand the feeling unless you live in a place without a beach , and where is often cloudy.
I still love the place where I live, it is my hometown after all.:)

dolcorn你好. A generally good text with minor adjustments. There is only one word where you were a bit more creative (bule?) and I could not understand the meaning. ;)

I will add a comment: I share your loving for the seaside, and apparently so does most human beings, even those who fear water... Research performed by Wallace Nichols, PhD, author of the book Blue Mind, demonstrated that at a deep level our brains react to the proximity of water. Here I quote a book review: "Dr. Nichols discuss emotional, behavioral, psychological and physical connections that draw humans to water - oceans, rivers and lakes, and the recent finding in neuroscience that indicates the proximity to water can improve mood, performance, health and success". In his book Dr. Nichols didn't mention anything about eating 1.5 kilo of delicious shrimps and feeling like being in heaven... maybe his research is incomplete? hahaha!

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