the normal day in my life
i don't know what i want to say today. I can't think that i have some interesting things to share with you .this day is just the another normal day in my life。 the sky is so bule with a slightly wind . And，lots of leaves has fallen and filled with our shool road. it give me a mistake to think maybe this is autumn instead of Spring。
last week ，when i went to bed ，it almost at midnight 。So many friends told me sleep lately is not good for my health。
so i would like to sleep early from tonight。
Nighty night
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the normal day in my life
i don't know what i want to say today. I can't think that i have some interesting things to share with you .this day is just (the) (or style?) another normal day in my life。 the sky is so bule blue with a slightly wind . And，lots of leaves has have fallen and filled with in/up our shool road. it gives me a mistake to think maybe this is autumn instead of Spring spring。last week ，when i went to bed ，it was almost at midnight 。So many friends told me to sleep lately is not good for my health。
so i would like to sleep early from tonight on。
Nighty night
These were all grammatical mistakes that I could find now.
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Wow, for me that's a quite beautiful lyric.
I think mainly there are no mistakes at all besides some very small. Some parts that could be considered as a mistake can also be considered as an original style of writing in my opinion. I'd like to give you some points later when I have enough time.
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the normal day in my life
I don't know what I to write about want to say today. I can't think of anything that i have some interesting things to share with you . Today this day is just like any other day in my life. the another normal day in my life。 The sky is very blue, and it is slightly windy today. so bule with a slightly wind . And a lot of leaves have fallen and the roads near my school were covered by them.，lots of leaves has fallen and filled with our shool road. It gives me the impression that it is autumn now, even though I know it is spring.it give me a mistake to think maybe this is autumn instead of Spring。Last week, I have been going to bed around midnight. last week ，when i went to bed ，it almost at midnight 。When my friends knew about this, they advised me not to go to bed so late, for it is not good for health.So many friends told me sleep lately is not good for my health。
So, I think I will go to bed earlier from tonight onwards. so i would like to sleep early from tonight。
Nighty night > Sweet dreams.
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where I live is autumn haha
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