please help me modify this essay!thanks My primary school teachers There were more than a dozen teachers during my time at primary school, but I only remember three of them. The first one was teacher Sun. she taught us Chinese for two years. She was about forty years old then. as I remember, she had big bright eyes and black curly hair. She often smiled ,so all students thought she was kindly teacher. She was extra nice to me .so I have been fond of mandarin since then. It is with regret that teacher Sun died because of cancer dozen years ago. she was a good teacher. Teacher Zhang was a male teacher in his fifties. He was very strict. When look at you, he could be scary. so the students were always afraid of him. I don’t know why he was especially good to me. when left the school, he gave me a dictionary as a present. I treasure it till this day. Teacher Wu was a happy teacher. She was good at joking. She often played games with us . We always couldn’t help laughing at her lessons. Unfortunately her only son is died by drowning s few years ago. But teacher Wu is an optimism woman . The year before last year, She was sixty years old , she gave birth two twins through vitro fertilization. I loved my primary school teacher. They were responsible teachers, they provided me with my happy childhood.