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The concept of electric vehicles will be most effective in the case of increasing availability of car charging stations and in the case of increasing production electricity by renewable energy sources. At the initial stage of development, the state can stimulate the popularization of electric vehicles by gradually introducing high taxes on classical cars, creating benefits for users of public transport or electric vehicles (for example, free parking spaces). Also in large cities, there is an opportunity to create certain zones, in which only ecological transport is possible.
The market is now able to offer a range of environmentally friendly cars. Large concerns among others specialized companies can offer models of electric cars. To the most sold electric vehicles for all time are Chevrolet Volt (over 100000 sales) with price $34,095 - $38,445, Nissan Leaf (100000 sales) with price from $30,680, Tesla Model S with price from $70,000 (above 85 000 units). Tesla Model S P100D has the longest range (approximately 507 km). It takes 10, 5 hours to charge the car at home or approximately one hour on charging station.
We can pay special attention to the concept of the first solar-powered family car with the name "Stella Lux" by Dutch company «Solar Team Eindhoven». To create the first model were used modern technologies, which made the structure of the car lightly (380 kg) that helps to increase the mileage range, which is more than 373 miles. In addition, the car has a battery pack, which adds an extra 430km to the car's overall range. This means that driver can use car also at night. The average speed of this car is 70 km / h, and the maximum value is 120 km / h. The cost of solar batteries for Stella is estimated at $ 4260. Stella Lux has an extended roof on both sides of the car. Because of this, we were able to place another row of solar panels on the car. Developers guarantee to charge the car in cloudy weather. When it is cloudy, the light goes in waves in the clouds and then comes on the roof at different spots, which increase energy producing. According to company’s statistic, 10 from 12 mouths the car produces more energy than it uses. Results of the researching based on Dutch National Statistics Centre according to which the average driving distance on a normal day is 70km a day. The car is equipped with modern means of navigation and safety, has comfortable salon and there is an opportunity to connect the car with a smartphone
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Hiya, So I don't know a lot about cars which is difficult when trying to correct your piece but I gave it a shot.
Please, help me correct it! I really need your help
The concept of electric vehicles will be most effective with the increased availability of car charging stations and with the increased production of renewable energy sources. (not so clear on what you mean by increased production of renewable energy sources) At the initial stage of development, the state can stimulate the popularization of electric vehicles by gradually introducing high taxes on classical cars, creating benefits for users of public transport and the use of electric vehicles with the added enticement of free parking. (for example, free parking spaces). Also In large cities there is also an opportunity to create certain zones, in which only ecological transport is possible.The market is now able to offer a range of environmentally friendly cars. Large concerns among others specialized companies can offer models of electric cars. ? To the most sold electric vehicles for of all time are Chevrolet Volt (over 100000 sales) with the price of $34,095 - $38,445, Nissan Leaf (100000 sales) with the price of $30,680, Tesla Model S with the price of $70,000 (above 85 000 units). Tesla Model S P100D has the longest range (approximately 507 km). It takes 10, 5 hours to charge the car at home or approximately one hour on a charging station.
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The concept of electric vehicles will be most effective in the case of increasing availability of car charging stations and in the case of increasing production of electricity by renewable energy sources. At the initial stage of development, the state canThe market is now able to offer a range of environment-friendly cars. Large concerns among other
Further more, we should pay special attention to the concept of the first solar-powered family car named "Stella Lux" by a Dutch company «Solar Team Eindhoven». To create the first model modern technologies were used, which made the structure of the car as light as(380 kg). This helps
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We can pay special attention to the concept (not sure what you mean by concept. do you mean brand of car or business model that the Dutch company used? Maybe instead we should pay special attention to the effective marketing...) of the first solar-powered family car with the name "Stella Lux" by the Dutch «Solar Team Eindhoven». They created the first model using modern technologies, which made the structure of the car lighter which in turn helped to increase the mileage range to more than 373 miles.To create the first model were used modern technologies, which made the structure of the car lightly (380 kg) that helps to increase the mileage range, which is more than 373 miles. In addition, the car has a battery pack, which adds an extra 430km to the car's overall range. This means that drivers can use the car also at night. The average speed of this car is 70 km / h, and the maximum value is 120 km / h. The cost of solar batteries for the Stella is estimated at $ 4260. Stella Lux has an extended roof on both sides of the car. Because of this, we (they unless you work for the company?) were able to place another row of solar panels on the car. Developers now can guarantee that the car will charge in cloudy weather. to charge the car in cloudy weather. When it is cloudy, the light goes in waves in through the clouds and then comes beames down on the roof at different spots, which increases energy production. According to the company’s statistic, 10 from 12 mouths (do you mean months?) the car produces more energy than it uses. Results of the research, ing based on Dutch National Statistics Centre, according to which show that the average driving distance on a normal day is 70km a day. The car is equipped with modern means of navigation and safety. It has comfortable salon (don't know what you mean by salon, do you mean seating?) and there is even means to connect to the car with a by smartphone.
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