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New phone I definitely have to buy a new cell phone. In the first place the speakers are broken, in fact when the phone is ringing i have to put my ear very closed to them. By doing so i still can use it. In addition every time i'm looking for something on the internet the connection is very slow. Not to mention the camera, last week the cell dropped out of my pocket while i was working! In spite of it is not an old model i absolutely have to save some money in order to get a new one. I'm sure that by the end of next month i will have bought a new cell phone !

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New phone

I definitely have to buy a new cell phone. In the first place the speakers are broken, when the phone is ringing i have to put my ear very close to it. By doing this, i can still use it. In addition every time i'm looking for something on the internet the connection is very slow. Not to mention the camera broke, last week the cell dropped out of my pocket while i was working! In spite of all this, is not an old model. I absolutely have to save some money in order to get a new one. I'm sure that
by the end of next month i will have bought a new cell phone !


Haha, I am sorry to hear this. There are some punctuation errors we should go over in person but the phrases are much better and it is nice to see some new vocabulary in there. I love the photo of your dog!

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New phone

I definitely have to buy a new cell phone. In the first place the speakers are broken, in fact, when the phone is ringing, I have to put my ear very close to them. By doing so, I can still use it. In addition, every time I'm looking for something on the internet, the connection is very slow. Not to mention the camera, last week the cell dropped out of my pocket while I was working! In spite of it not being an old model, I absolutely have to save some money in order to get a new one. I'm sure that
by the end of next month I would have bought a new cell phone!

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