finish of spiring vacation and start of school
It's been a long time since I wrote this notebook...
久々にこのノートブックを書きます〜
Recently, my spiring vacation finished after all and started to do practical training in a hospital!
It is very hard everyday...There are a lot of something new so I have to study after school:'-(
最近、春休みがとうとう終わって、病院実習が始まりました！
とっても毎日大変です･･･知らないことがたくさんあるので、学校が終わったら勉強しないといけません。
I noticed one thing while I was doing this training in a hospital.That is doctores in Japan are so busy!!!!They don't stay one place,walk around a hospital and have some conferences etc...
I don't find hope in my future recently. Are doctoters in other countries also busy?
この病院実習であることに気づきました。日本の医者ってとっても忙しいということです！
彼らは一つの場所にとどまることがないし、病院内を歩き回るし、いくつものカンファレンスをやってるし･･･
最近未来に希望が持てないです。ほかの国の医者も忙しいんですかね？
I'll try to enjoy this training；）Wish me luck!
がんばって実習を楽しもうと思います♪
応援しててください〜
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The end finish of spiring spring vacation and start of school
It's been a long time since I've wrote written in this notebook...久々*にこのノートブックを書きます〜
Recently, My spiring spring vacation finished after all finally came to an end recently, and started to do practical I began clinical training in a hospital! **
It Every day is very hard everyday...There are a lot of something new things to learn,*** so I have to study after school:'-(
最近、春休みがとうとう終わって、病院実習が始まりました！
とっても毎日大変です･･･知らないことがたくさんあるので、学校が終わったら勉強しないといけません。
I noticed one thing while I was doing this training in a hospital: That is doctores doctors in Japan are so busy!!!!They don't stay one place, but they walk around a hospital and have some conferences etc...
I don't find hope in my future recently. Are doctoters doctors in other countries also busy?
この病院実習であることに気づきました。日本の医者ってとっても忙しいということです！
彼らは一つの場所にとどまることがないし、病院内を歩き回るし、いくつものカンファレンスをやってるし･･･
最近未来に希望が持てないです。ほかの国の医者も忙しいんですかね？
I'll try to enjoy this training；）Wish me luck!
がんばって実習を楽しもうと思います♪
応援しててください〜
Kanako,
Good luck! 頑張って！
Are you in medical school? Are you going to be a doctor? a nurse? a medical technician? I am making some comments and explanations below. (If I exceed the 5000 character limit, I'll make a second message).
* I've never seen the expression 久々 before! I like it. Is it a friendly, casual way to say 久しぶり？
** I changed the order of the words to sound more natural. For "とうとう” you wrote "after all." I don't know if that is the correct word here. Also, for 病院実習 I changed it to "clinical training in a hospital."
*** "a lot of something new" is not the right expression. For 知らないことがたくさんある I would say, "I am learning a lot of new things" or "I am learning new things every day."
(Also, "every day" and "everyday" 違う言葉です。You used "everyday" when you should have used "every day").
And yes, I think doctors are probably very busy everywhere.
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