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Reading an English picture book Hello everyone! Could you please correct the following sentences if they are wrong? If all they are correct, just let me know that in comment. Thank you very much! This boy is happy because he has an ice cream (in his hand). He is going to eat it. Ops! He has dropped the ice cream on the sand. Now he is sad. This boy is dry. He is going to swim in the sea. After some time: now he is wet, because he is in the water. He is swimming. There are a few seagulls on the surface of the water. There is a ship floating on the sea. These children are playing on the see-saw. Now this girl is up, and the boy is down. There is a turn near the slide. These children are waiting for their turns to slide down the slide. The girl is first. The boy is last. And thid boy is on top and going to slide down. After some time: he slid down the slide and now he is at the bottom of the slide. Thank you for your attention!

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Reading an English picture book

Hello everyone!

Could you please correct the following sentences if they are wrong? If all they are correct, just let me know that in comment. Thank you very much!

This boy is happy because he has an ice cream (in his hand). He is going to eat it. Ops! He has dropped the ice cream on the sand. Now he is sad. Correct.

This boy is dry. He is going to swim in the sea. After some time: now he is wet, because he is in the water. He is swimming. Correct.

There are a few seagulls on the surface of the water. There is a ship floating on the sea.Correct.

These children are playing on the see-saw. Now this girl is up, and the boy is down.Correct.

There is a turn line near the slide. These children are waiting for their turns to slide down the slide. The girl is first. The boy is last. And thids boy is on top and going to slide down. After some time: he slid down the slide and now he is at the bottom of the slide.

Thank you for your attention!
1

Reading an English picture book

Hello everyone!

Could you please correct the following sentences if they are wrong? If all they are correct, just let me know that in comment. Thank you very much!

This boy is happy because he has an ice cream (in his hand). He is going to eat it. Ops! He has dropped the ice cream on the sand. Now he is sad.

This boy is dry. He is going to swim in the sea. After some time: now he is wet, because he is in the water. He is swimming.

There are a few seagulls on the surface of the water. There is a ship floating on the sea.

These children are playing on the see-saw. Now this girl is up, and the boy is down.

There is a turn near the slide. These children are waiting for their turns to slide down the slide. The girl is first. The boy is last. And this boy is on top and going to slide down. After some time, he slid down the slide and now he is at the bottom of the slide.

Thank you for your attention!

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