News about a passenger forcibly removed from airplane went viral.
This morning I read a very upset news. The news is about an on-board passenger being forcefully removed from the airplane due to overbooked flight. It was known that the flight was full and they need another 4 seats to accommodate the flight crews. At the boarding gate, the announcement has been made to warn the passengers that the flight was overbooked and asking for volunteers to give up their seats. As compensation, accommodation and food will be provided. However, there are no one willing to volunteer. As a result, after the passengers were boarded, 3 polices went to a man, which they claimed that he was chosen randomly by the computer to be removed from the plane. The polices were violently and forcefully drag this man out of his seat. The man was screaming and his mouth bleeds. He was drag all the way out harshly and brutally.
It is kind of pain to see an innocent man being treated like that. He did not do anything wrong or committed unlawful action. I think the flight authority owe an apology to the man.
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News about a passenger being forcibly removed from airplane went viral.
This morning I read a piece of very upsetting (adjective) news (noun). The news is about an on-board passenger being forcefully removed from the airplane due to an overbooked flight. It was known that the flight was full and they needed another 4 seats to accommodate the flight crews. At the boarding gate, the an announcement has been was made to warn the passengers that the flight was overbooked and asked for volunteers to give up their seats. As compensation, accommodation and food will be provided. However, there are no one was willing to volunteer. As a result, after the passengers had were boarded, three policemen (We try to use words for smaller numbers; "police" is an uncountable noun. We can change it to a countable noun by using "policemen".)went to a man, which they claimed that he was chosen randomly by the computer to be removed from the plane. The policemen were violently and forcefully dragged this man out of his seat. The man was screaming and his mouth was bleeding. He was dragged all the way out of the planeharshly and brutally.It is kind of (this is an informal and casual way of saying "rather") rather painful to see an innocent man being treated like that. He did not do anything wrong or committed (After "did", the next verb should be in simple present tense. Eg: did not do / did not commit)unlawful action. I think the flight authority owe the man an apology. to the man.
Hi Sherly,
I am shocked to hear of such atrocity. They certainly should not do that.
Cheers, Lance
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News about a passenger forcibly removed from airplane went viral.
This morning I read a very upsetting news. The news is about an on-board passenger being forcefully removed from the airplane due to an overbooked flight. It was known that the flight was full and they needed another 4 seats to accommodate the flight crews. At the boarding gate, the announcement was has been made to warn the passengers that the flight was overbooked and asked for volunteers to give up their seats. As compensation, accommodation and food will would be provided. However, there was are no one willing to volunteer. As a result, after the passengers were >(the passengers were boarded is correct my bad), 3 polices policemen went to a man, which they claimed that he was chosen randomly by the computer to be removed from the plane. The polices police were violently and forcefully drag dragged this man out of his seat. The man was screaming and his mouth bleedsbled . He was dragdragged all the way out harshly and brutally.
It is kind of pain painful to see an innocent man being treated like that. He did not do anything wrong or committed commit an unlawful action. I think the flight authority owe an apology to the man.
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Good job overall
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News about a passenger forcibly removed from airplane went viral.
This morning I read some very upsetting news. The story is about an on-board passenger being forcefully removed from the airplane due to an overbooked flight. It was known that the flight was full and they needed another 4 seats to accommodate the flight crews. At the boarding gate, the announcement was made to warn the passengers that the flight was overbooked and asking for volunteers were asked to give up their seats. As compensation, accommodation and food would be provided. However, there are no one willing to volunteer. As a result, after the passengers were boarded, 3 policemen went up to a man, whom they claimed that he was chosen randomly by the computer to be removed from the plane. The polices were and violently and forcefully drag this him out of his seat. The man was screaming and his mouth was bleeding. He was dragged all the way out harshly and brutally.It pains me to see an innocent man being treated like that. He did not do anything wrong or committed any unlawful action (or 'crime'). I think the flight authorities owe the man an apology to the man.
I agree with you! Great job.
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