30 days of writing in English: Day 10
Love in three languages
I have a daugther. She´s a Licensed in modern languages. Currently, she lives and works in Venezuela. She is 26 years old and she´s single. She has a boyfriend. He´s Colombian and like my daugther he's a Licensed in modern languages. They met at university. First, they were the best friends. As time when by, they discovered that they were in love.
I tell you that this courtship is really adorable. My daugther and her boyfriend have a beautiful relationships and I think they are "Soul Mates" because they share several things in common: They also share their taste for good food and like to cook together. they love nature, they love to walk in the park, they love the macaws (guacamayas) so they care for them and respect their lifestyle (.There are two beautiful macaws that made their nest in a palm tree very close to the house and every day visit the balcony of my daughter's room to be fed with seeds and fruits, see the photo I attached).
I call this lovely relationship "a love in three languages" because they both speak Spanish which is their native language, English and French.
Thank you for your correction!
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30 days of writing in English: Day 10
Love in three languagesI have a daughter . She´s licensed in modern languages. Currently, she lives and works in Venezuela. She is 26 years old and she´s in a relationship.
I think that (sounds more natural) that their relationship is really adorable. My daugther and her boyfriend have a beautiful relationships and I think they are "Soul Mates" because they share several things in common: They also share their taste for good food and they like to cook together. they love nature, they love to walk in the park, they love
I call this lovely relationship "a love in three languages" because they both speak Spanish which is their native language, English and French.
Thank you for your correction!
Very good you have very little to correct. A great photo.
Red = corrections. Blue = suggestions to make it sound more natural.
El coche/balcón/perro de mi hija etc = My daughter's car/balcony/dog.
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30 days of writing in English: Day 10
Love in three languagesI have a daugther. She´s a L licensed in modern languages. Currently, she lives and works in Venezuela. She is 26 years old and she´s in a relationship. She has a boyfriend. He´s Colombian and, like my daugther, he's a L licensed in modern languages. They met at university in college. First, they were the best friends. As time when went by, they discovered that they were in love.
I tell you that this courtship Their relationship is really adorable. My daugther and her boyfriend have a beautiful relationships and I think they are "Soul Mates" because they share several things in common: They also share their taste for good food and like to cook together. they love nature, they love to walk in the park, they love the macaws (guacamayas) so they care for them and respect their lifestyle (.There are two beautiful macaws that made their nest in a palm tree very close to the house and every day they visit the balcony of my daughter's room to be fed with seeds and fruits, see the photo I attached).
I call this lovely relationship "a love in three languages" because they both speak Spanish which is their native language, English and French.
Thank you for your correction!
MUY BIEN HECHO!
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