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My friend John. Today I am going to type about a friend. He is John. To begin let us consider what the advantages and disadvantages of be John’s friend. Maybe the last sentence sounds bad. Obviously the disadvantages are silly things, but the main goal of this writing is practise some structures. On the one hand, the first thing that needs to be said is that he is, probably, the funniest boy in the world. As you can imagine, this is an advantage to be her friend, because with he, you always have a good time. He has a good mood, he has an intelligent mood and he is always listening your words to say a silliness and make you “angry”. On the other hand, we can observe a little disadvantage. He support Real Madrid and this fact provokes difficult situations many times with his friends. More than support I think this football team is his love, almost I would almost dare to say that it is his life. It is not the first time that I see an argue between he and another friend because of a game. Yes, he lives this sport very passionately. To draw the conclusion, one can say that nonetheless I can handle it most of the time, unless he is very upset with his jokes. Definitely I like to be his friend.

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My friend John.

Today I am going to type about a friend. He is John. To begin let us consider what the advantages and disadvantages of being John’s friend. Maybe the last sentence sounds bad. Obviously the disadvantages are silly things, but the main goal of this writing is to practice some structures.

On the one hand, the first thing that needs to be said is that he is, probably, the funniest boy in the world. As you can imagine, this is an advantage to be his friend, because with him, you always have a good time. He has a good mood, he is intelligent and he is always listening your words to say something funny to make you “angry”.

On the other hand, we can observe a little disadvantage. He supports Real Madrid and this fact provokes difficult situations many times with his friends. More than support I think this football team is his love, almost I would almost dare to say that it is his life. It is not the first time that I have seen an argument between him and another friend because of a game. Yes, he lives this sport very passionately.

To draw the conclusion, one can say that nonetheless I can handle it most of the time, unless he is very upset with his jokes. I definitely like to be his friend.



great job!

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My friend John.

Today I am going to write about a friend. He His name is John. To begin let us consider what the advantages and disadvantages of being John’s friend. Maybe the last sentence sounds bad. Obviously, the disadvantages are silly things, but the main goal of this writing is practicing some structures.

On the one hand, the first thing that should be said is that he is, probably, the funniest boy in the world. As you can imagine, this is an advantage to be his friend, because with him, you always have a good time. He has a good mood, he has an intelligent mood and he is always listening to your words to say silly things and make you “angry”.

On the other hand, we can observe a little disadvantage. He supports Real Madrid and this fact provokes difficult situations many times with his friends. More than support I think, this football team is his love, almost I would almost dare to say that it's his life. It's not the first time that I see an argument between him and another friend because of a game. Yes, he lives this sports very passionately.

To draw the conclusion, one can say nonetheless I can handle it most of the time, unless he is very upset with his jokes. Definitely I like to be his friend.

N.B. I couldn't understand your phrase unless he is very upset with his jokes...... but nice work in general

 

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