job hunting
last year I past JLPT level2 test.
So I came to shanghai this year to find a job which could use Japenese.
It is so hard to find a job in shanghai.Just one week I spent 5000 yuan.life in shanghai is so expensive.when I could find a job.how long could i can go with the rest of money.
Everyday I was busy hunting a new job and finding one house which is for renting.
I was so tired and got sick.
This kind of life made me feel pain.maybe "did not dead" is properate for the experience.
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Job hunting
Last year I passed the JLPT Level 2 test (what does JLPT stand for?). So I came to Shanghai this year to find a job in which I could utilize my Japanese. It is so hard to find a job in Shanghai. In just one week I spent 5000 Yuan. Life in Shanghai is so expensive. I don't know when I can find a job or how long my current funds can last. Everyday I am busy hunting for a new job and looking for a house to rent. I feel so tired and I am also sick. This kind of life makes me feel very stressful (pain is usually used to describe physical injuries). Maybe "life experience" or "at least not dead" is appropriate to describe this experience. (not sure if I have interpreted this final sentence correctly. I've changed the last part to all being in the present tense, in order to keep uniformity).
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Jjob Hhunting
Llast year I passed the JLPT level 2 test.So I came to Sshanghai this year to find a job which could use Japanese.
It is so hard to find a job in Sshanghai. Just in one week I spent 5000 yuan. Llife in Sshanghai is so expensive. Wwhen can I find a job? Hhow long could iI can go with the rest of my money?
Everyday I was busy hunting a new job and finding a house for rent.
I was so tired and got sick.
This kind of life pained me. Mmaybe "did not die" describes me.
Very well written!
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