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A century has passed since the creation of the first serial car by Carl Benz and the mass production of Ford cars with low prices for all Americans. During this period of time cars became so widespread that it begins to pose a threat to the environment. In addition, a huge crowd of cars creates a problem for residents in large metropolitans, which confront face to face with daily traffic congestion, noise, and vibration. It is all a price, which society must pay for benefits connected with automotive. For example, the main benefits of tracks in freight transport is a possibility of moving goods practically in any place, the main requirement is the road infrastructure, which is unrealistic in the case of rail transportation. It is impossible to provide the presence of cargo terminals and other railway infrastructure in all settlements. Even though suppose, that railway infrastructure will be in all settlements; there would be problems with transporting goods from terminals to final destinations (stores, warehouses, factories).
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A century has passed since the creation of the first serial car by Carl Benz and the mass production of Ford cars with low prices for all Americans. During this period of time cars became so widespread that it begins to pose a threat to the environment. In addition, a huge crowd (fleet of) of cars creates a problem for residents in large metropolitans, which confront face to face with (poses) daily traffic congestion, noise, and vibration. It is all a the price which society must pay for benefits connected with automotive. For example, the main benefits of tracks in freight transport is a possibility of moving goods practically in any place, anywhere. The main requirement is the road infrastructure, which is unrealistic in the case of rail transportation. It is impossible to provide the presence of cargo terminals and other railway infrastructure in all settlements. Even though suppose, that railway (lines) infrastructure will be in all settlements; there would be problems with transporting goods from terminals to final destinations (stores, warehouses, factories).1
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A century has passed since the creation of the first serial car by Carl Benz and the mass production of Ford cars with low prices for all Americans. During this period of time cars became so widespread that it began to pose a threat to the environment. In addition, a huge crowd of cars creates a problem for residents in large metropolitans, which causes problems such as, daily traffic congestion, noise, and vibration. It is all a price society must pay for benefits connected with automotives. For example, the main benefits of tracks in freight transport is being able to move goods practically in any place, the main requirement is the road infrastructure, which is unrealistic in the case of rail transportation. It is impossible to provide the presence of cargo terminals and other railway infrastructure in all settlements. Even if railway infrastructure is in all settlements; there would be problems with transporting goods from terminals to the final destination (stores, warehouses, factories).0
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A century has passed since the creation of the first true automobile ( by Karl Benz) and its first mass production (by Henry Ford), which made cars affordable to a majority of Americans).For example, the main benefits of tracks in freight transport is a possibility of moving goods practically in any place, the main requirement is the road infrastructure, which is unrealistic in the case of rail transportation.?
For example, with just a good road infrastructure in place, goods can be easily transported to any place, whereas freight transport, which must have capital -intensive infrastructures to function efficiently, is not a realistic option in many cases.
It is impossible to build provide the presence of cargo terminals and other railway infrastructures in all human settlements. Even if we though suppose that railway infrastructures are in place will be in all human settlements, there is still the would be problem of with transporting the goods from their terminals to their final destinations -- maybe to a store, a warehouse or a factory -- which here again requires the usage of transport by roads.
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