Are these sentences correct? (A letter)
你好！
今年我搬家去别的地方。更大的地方。这个地方有好的公共交通和很多商店。新房子有电梯！一个小中国的超市很附近。他们有很多中国的产品。还有地铁很附近。位置很非常安静。我很高兴。
这个周末我和我的朋友JENNY去商店买东西。我想要买一个蓝色的衬衫，录色的帽子还有运动服。然后我门吃午饭。
昨天我去了一个做生日。MARK的生日。MARK有新的工作。他是英语老师。他新学校很大。差不多１３００学生。他的公司更好，他非常满意。
我不久将给你再写信。
Hello!
This year I will move to another place. A bigger place. This place has very good public transportation and a lot of shops. The new house has a elevator! Nearby is a little Chinese supermarket. They have a lot of Chinese products. The subway is also very close. The neighboorhood is very quiet. I'm very happy.
This weekend I'm going shopping with my friend Jenny.
I want to buy a blue shirt, a greet hat and also exercise clothes.
Afterwards we will have lunch.
Yesterday I went to a birthday party. It was Marks birthday.
Mark has a new job. He is a English teacher.
His new school is a very big school. Almost 1300 students.
His salary is much better now and he is very satisfied!
I will write another letter very soon!.
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Are these sentences correct? (A letter)
你好！今年我会搬家去别另一个的地方。，一个更大的地方。这个地方有好方便的公共交通和很多商店。我搬去的新房子里有电梯！一个小中国的超市很附近附近有一个中国小超市。他们那里有很多中国的产品。附近还有地铁很附近（OR 地铁离我家很近）。新家的位置很非常安静。我很高兴。
这个周末我和我的朋友JENNY去商店买东西。我想要买一个蓝色的衬衫，录绿色的帽子还有运动服。然后我门们去吃午饭。
昨天我去了一个做生日聚会。MARK的生日。MARK有新的工作。他是英语老师。他新学校很大。差不多１３００个学生。他的公司更比从前的好，他非常满意。
我会不久将给你再给你写信给你。
Hello!
This year I will move to another place. A bigger place. This place has very good public transportation and a lot of shops. The new house has a elevator! Nearby is a little Chinese supermarket. They have a lot of Chinese products. The subway is also very close. The neighboorhood is very quiet. I'm very happy.
This weekend I'm going shopping with my friend Jenny.
I want to buy a blue shirt, a greet hat and also exercise clothes.
Afterwards we will have lunch.
Yesterday I went to a birthday party. It was Marks birthday.
Mark has a new job. He is a English teacher.
His new school is a very big school. Almost 1300 students.
His salary is much better now and he is very satisfied!
I will write another letter very soon!.
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Are these sentences correct? (A letter)
你好！今年我将搬家去别的地方。一个更大的地方。这那个地方有好的公共交通设施和很多商店。新房子还有电梯！附近还有一个很小的中国的超市很附近。他们那儿有很多中国的产品。还有地铁也很附近。小区位置很非常安静。我很高兴。
这个周末我要和我的朋友JENNY去商店买东西。我想要买一个蓝色的衬衫，录绿色的帽子还有运动服。然后我们会一起门吃午饭。( 如果你想写绿、率、旅、律、滤、铝、虑… 在手机或者电脑上打“lv”的拼音，才行)
昨天我去了一个做生日聚会。是MARK的生日。MARK有了新的工作。他是英语老师。他新学校很大。差不多有１３００个学生。他的公司现在也很更好，他非常满足意。
我不久将过段时间会再给你再写信。
Hello!
This year I will move to another place. A bigger place. This place has very good public transportation and a lot of shops. The new house has a elevator! Nearby is a little Chinese supermarket. They have a lot of Chinese products. The subway is also very close. The neighboorhood is very quiet. I'm very happy.
This weekend I'm going shopping with my friend Jenny.
I want to buy a blue shirt, a greet hat and also exercise clothes.
Afterwards we will have lunch.
Yesterday I went to a birthday party. It was Marks birthday.
Mark has a new job. He is a English teacher.
His new school is a very big school. Almost 1300 students.
His salary is much better now and he is very satisfied!
I will write another letter very soon!.
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Yes, they are basically correct. They can only be more literary.
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美女 / měi nǚ /
旅游 / lǚ yóu /
律师 / lǜ shī /
拼音里最后有这个 ǜ 在手机或者电脑上，就要写 v 主要是为了区别 u (有 / yǒu /)
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