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30 days of writing in English: Day 8 Reiki for a nervous puppy My neighbor is really adorable. She´s a very kind woman and is always willing to help her neighbors. She has a dog. My neighbor's dog is very special, becuase it was mistreated by this former owners and then abandoned in a municipal kennel. Fortunately, it was adopted by this family who love it very much. As a result of this repeat abuse, this puppy is very nervous and agressived. It spends all day barking and growling at everyone. When I knock on the door to talk my neighbor, it barks steadily without stopping or resting. I´m a Reiki therapist, a metodh of energy healing that is used in peoples an animals to harmonize and balance the energy in the body, mind, emotions and spiritual conection. Yesterday I tolked whith my neighbor about the benefits of Reiki to heal the pain of her puppy. I explain to her de following advantages: relieve depression, calm and reassure it hiperactivity and stress. I hope my neighbor considers this opcion to help her pet. Thank yoy for your correction!

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30 days of writing in English: Day 8

Reiki for a nervous puppy

My neighbor is really adorable. She´s a very kind woman and is always willing to help her neighbors. She has a dog. My neighbor's dog is very special, becuase it was mistreated by its former owners and then abandoned in a municipal kennel. Fortunately, it was adopted by this family who love it very much.
As a result of having been  repeatedly abused, this puppy is very nervous and aggressive. It spends all day barking and growling at everyone. When I knock on the door to talk my neighbor, it barks constantly [this word reads slightly better than 'steadily'] without stopping or resting.
I´m a Reiki therapist, a method of energy healing that is used in peoples and animals to harmonize and balance the energy in the body, mind, emotions and spiritual connection. Yesterday I spoke [I'm sorry, this is an annoying irregular verb!] with my neighbor about the benefits of Reiki, and how it could help to heal the pain of her puppy. I explained to her the following advantages: relieve depression, calm and reduce its hyperactivity and stress.
I hope my neighbor considers this option to help her pet.

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