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Climate change Climate change. Hello everybody! Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Fernando Casanova and today I'll talk about climate change. Lately everybody has complained or heard about how the weather is getting worse and worse, but anybody has done something to fix it. Besides there are some people who say that climate change is a myth invented by scientists. However we have seen some of the consequences of this. For instance, while ice caps in the north are melting, fields in Egypt are covered with snow. But, what can we do in order to fix it? First of all, we have to stop of cutting down forests. They play an important role in reducing the air pollution by absorbing the green-house gases and turning them into fresh air. Apart from reducing the air pollution, they also provide a refuge to millions of species. Secondly, cars are a big problem in cities and can drive to global warming. In addition to produce noise pollution. That's why we have to find a new way to commute to work. Such as, using bikes or electric cars. Finally, we need to invent more environmentally friendly methods of clearing up rubbish. Every day we burn up tons of rubbish or worse, we litter it into the sea killing millions of fish. In conclusion, I would say that there are many ways to help in order to prevent climate change, but we have to take action before it was too late. (I'd be very grateful if you could correct any mistakes I have made and give me some feedback, thanks in advance.)

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Climate change

Climate change.

Hello everybody! Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Fernando Casanova and today I'll talk about climate change.

Lately, everybody has complained or heard about how the weather is getting worse and worse, but nobody has done anything something to fix it. Besides, there are some people who say that climate change is a myth invented by scientists. However, we have seen some of the consequences of this. For instance, while ice caps in the north are melting, fields in Egypt are covered with snow. But, what can we do in order to fix it?

First of all, we have to stop cutting down forests. They play an important role in reducing the air pollution by absorbing the greenhouse gases and turning them into fresh air. Apart from reducing the air pollution, they also provide a refuge to millions of animal species.

Secondly, cars are a big problem in cities and can drive to up global warming in addition to producing noise pollution. That's why we have to find a new way to commute to work such as using bikes or electric cars.

Finally, we need to invent more environmentally-friendly methods of clearing up rubbish. Every day, we burn up tons of rubbish or worse, we litter discard it into the sea, killing millions of fish.

In conclusion, I would say that there are many ways to help in order to prevent climate change, but we have to take action before it is too late.

(I'd be very grateful if you could correct any mistakes I have made and give me some feedback, thanks in advance.)

Hi Belmonth, you have clear ideas which I could easily understand and relate to. I only edited a little for you. Keep writing! 

Cheers, Lance 

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