In love with my land

There is a specific time and place that I love so much - near the last point of the peninsula when the sun starts his downhill to set by the sea. and All of the sky becomes full of a lots of bright and dense colors, bright and dens that are reflected on same some little clouds and the wind mixes with them in magical forms with wonderful colors .

You can see the seven Islands islands in front of you, dark, like a very intense blue. and From one of them you can see the smoke of the volcano that the wind takes far away, far, in a long line. You can follow it with your eyes and relax yourself because all around you there is the sound of the sea, there are all of the profiles of the Islands islands and if you look up in the meanwhile meantime, the sun goes down and the moon goes up, bright, a little Pink pink and argentine (this word is archaic, "silver" would be better).

But the most amazing moment is when the sun touches the sea - red, like a big ball or orange or a very intense pink. It's seems that it burns in silence and all of the atmosphere around you talks with you, like the nature the air the wind, you can breathe the life of Sicily and all the stress, all the things in your head disappear.

Very nice! Main points are:

In the third person, English verbs unless irregular will end in "s" or "es" so make sure to add that if you use the third person (he, she it).

Capital letters are only used with nouns if it is a "proper noun". So, a specific person, place or thing. There are also a few exceptions due to the history or the word such as days of the week and months. Colours and the word "island" wouldn't have a capital letter unless it was a specific island such as "the Canary Islands".

"Meanwhile" is a conjunction. "Meantime" is a noun. So you can say "in the meantime", but not "in the meanwhile."