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Invitation Letter 1 Dear Neighbour, I hope this letter finds you well. I’m your new neighbour who just moved into this district last week. I’m writing to invite you to join a welcome party I held in my new house. The party will start at 6 pm next Friday, and I’ll be cooking a meal at my house. All the vegetables I used are planted by myself on the roof of my house. And my homemade pickle tomato is also ready to eat. Moreover, there will have different types of drink served in the party. Do you drink alcoholic? If yes, I suppose you will like the Chinese sweet rice wine. On one more positive note, it will be video game time after finishing the dinner. You can bring your favourite video game on that day if you want. After the party finished, you can take the free mini bus to back home. I hope you’ll have a great time next Friday. Best regards, xxx

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Invitation Letter 1

Dear Neighbour,

I hope this letter finds you well. I’m your new neighbour who just moved into this district last week. I’m writing to invite you to join a welcome party I'm having in my new house.

The party will start at 6 pm next Friday, and I’ll be cooking a meal at my house. All the vegetables I'm using are planted by myself on the roof of my house. And my homemade pickled tomato is also ready to eat.

Moreover, there will have different types of drink served in the party. Do you likealcoholic drinks? If yes, I suppose you will like the Chinese sweet rice wine.

On one more positive note, it will be video game time after we finish dinner. You can bring your favourite video game on that day if you want.

After the party finished, you can take the free mini bus to back home. I hope you’ll have a great time next Friday.

Best regards,

xxx

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Hi Shawn,

    There were only a few corrections, mostly tenses. Let me know if you have any questions.

I hope that helps!

Best,

Julie

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