明天我会过我的生日。
明天我会过我的生日。
Tomorrow I will celebrate my birthday.
请你七点来我家吃蛋糕唱歌跳舞等等。
Please come to my home at 7 o'clock to eat cake, sing, dance, etc.
我不请求收礼物，可是随你便，你可以带一把花儿或者一瓶葡萄酒。
I don't need gifts, but if you wish, you can bring some flowers or a bottle of wine.
我家在南枫树：
I live in south Maple:
从高速公路出来，上二路，往南开车两英里。
From the highway, on Second Street, drive south for 2 miles.
过五个红绿灯，到了第六个红绿灯，往右拐，再往前开少于一个英里。
Pass 5 traffic lights. At the 6th traffic light, turn right and continue for less than a mile.
到了一个老消防站，往左一拐，就到了。
At the old fire station, turn left and you're there.
要是你需要骑车来，给王朋打一个电话。
If you need a ride, give Wang Peng a call.
他可开车来接你。
He can come pick you up.
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明天我过生日。
明天我过生日。Tomorrow I will celebrate my birthday.
请你七点来我家吃蛋糕唱歌跳舞等等。
Please come to my home at 7 o'clock to eat cake, sing, dance, etc.
我不需要收礼物，可是随你便，你可以带一把花儿或者一瓶葡萄酒。
I don't need gifts, but if you wish, you can bring some flowers or a bottle of wine.
我家住在南枫树：
I live in south Maple:
从高速公路出来，上二路，往南开车两英里。
From the highway, on Second Street, drive south for 2 miles.
过五个红绿灯，到第六个红绿灯，往右拐，再往前开少于一英里。
Pass 5 traffic lights. At the 6th traffic light, turn right and continue for less than a mile.
到一个老消防站，往左一拐，就到了。
At the old fire station, turn left and you're there.
要是你需要骑车来，给王朋打一个电话。
If you need a ride, give Wang Peng a call.
他可以开车来接你。
He can come pick you up.
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明天我会过我的生日。
明天我会过我的生日。Tomorrow I will celebrate my birthday.
我邀请你请你七点来我家吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞等等。
Please come to my home at 7 o'clock to eat cake, sing, dance, etc.
我不要请求收礼物，但是可是你随意随你便，你可以带一束把花儿或者一瓶葡萄酒。
I don't need gifts, but if you wish, you can bring some flowers or a bottle of wine.
我家在南枫树：
I live in south Maple:
从高速公路出来，上二路，往南开车两英里。
From the highway, on Second Street, drive south for 2 miles.
过五个红绿灯，到了第六个红绿灯，往右拐，再往前开不到少于一个英里。
Pass 5 traffic lights. At the 6th traffic light, turn right and continue for less than a mile.
到了一个老消防站，往左一拐，就到了。
At the old fire station, turn left and you're there.
要是你需要骑车来，给王朋打一个电话。
If you need a ride, give Wang Peng a call.
他可以开车来接你。
He can come pick you up.
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Good work!
One small mistake.
要是你需要搭车骑车来，给王朋打一个电话。
If you need a ride, give Wang Peng a call.
他可开车来接你。
He can come pick you up.
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明天我会过我的生日。
明天我会 过 庆祝 我的生日。Tomorrow I will celebrate my birthday.
(when you use the verb "celebrate", I would speculate that you are going to do sth. special with sb. in your birthday, thus, i will suggest to replace 过 by 庆祝), ( your sentence is correct but comes with two means : 1. you will "celebrate" your birthday, or 2. tomorrow is your birthday but you will not do anything special, just like a normal working day. and the full meaning depends on your further explanation or the tone you speak)
请你七点来我家吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞等等。(you need punctuation between words with similar importance in a sentence)
Please come to my home at 7 o'clock to eat cake, sing, dance, etc.
(when you put 请你 in the head of a sentence, it somehow sounds a little bit impolite, or giving an order. I think you tended to be polite when you use "please" in an English sentence, so native speaker will say "七点時请来我家吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞等等" remember to omit the Objective"你" after "请", which will always make it sounds or looks more polite.)
我不请求收需要礼物，可是随你便 但是如果你想(这么做)，你可以带一把花儿或者一瓶葡萄酒。
I don't need gifts, but if you wish, you can bring some flowers or a bottle of wine.
(you can try to extend your English sentence like - but if you wish (to do this), and you have just abbreviate some words in the brackets, so we do the same thing in Chinese.)
This is my first time trying to correct sentences for non-native speaker, and I hope my explanation satisfies you.
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