Who could help me to correct the grammatical mistakes of the following paragraph? The 1960s is a turbulent era, for Pakistan is even more so, perennial and India and Afghanistan because Kashmir and Barker with the Nazan issue on the dispute and not, and several people because of life and distress, people are destitute, Nazneen Was born in such a time. Her birth is particularly dramatic, her mother Lupuban thought it was indigestion caused by stomach pain, but do not know their children are about to be born, but also because the reluctant to spend money on the calligrapher just listen to the days of life waiting for a child born, Fortunately, her husband finally called the birth attendant was born.Lupuban particularly like to say resigned,, and even send a child to the hospital is also opposed“We must not work with the people right. No matter what happens, I have received. My child can not waste energy and fate. In this way, she will be sturdy” （第4页）。In the process of Nazneen's growth she heard the most of her mother told her the story of "resignation", She never doubted the logic of "resignation" story. Nazneen follows his father's arrangements for marriage, eighteen years old to marry nearly forty, and never met Chanel.When Abba asked her if she wanted to see the man's picture, she just shook her head and said“Abba, you picked me the husband, very good. I wish I could be a good wife, like mother。”〔第7页〕Nazneen is a good girl who is obedient, she does not violate the orders and wishes of the parents, married the so-called "good husband", rather than sister Hassina as, "love marriage" and And saw the nephew of the director of the sawmill, not only contrary to the wishes of their parents, but also to parents ashamed. After marriage, Naznaien listened to her husband Chanu's arrangement, and away from home with him, traveled across the sea to London, living with the Bengal people called tower village. In London, Nazneen's life continues the rhythm and regulation of life in Bangladesh, staying at home with her husband's arrangements, doing housework, cleaning, praying, that is her daily life of all content..In the scene of Azerbaijan's visit to Nazneen's house, we see that Nazneen can not do anything, according to Chanel's action, Nazneen himself does not have the initiative.“If I were the kind of hopeful person, I knew what I would expect”。