Want to feel better.
I got a severe cold.
I have been sicked for 5 days. It is so terrible.
I want to you guys care your healthy.
I got a shot today at hospital.
I hope feel better tomorrow.
I can't do anything for now.
I want to be better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Want to feel better.
I have got a severe cold.I have been sick for 5 days. It is so terrible.
I want you guys to take care of your health.
I got a shot today at the hospital.
I hope I feel better tomorrow.
I can't do anything for now.
I want to be better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hello Bonnie,
I am sorry to hear you are sick, if it is a severe cold keep warm and drink plenty of hot liquids.
To make your text more natural you should connect the sentences and not write them as a list.
I have got a severe cold and I have been sick for 5 days. It is so terrible that I got a shot today at the hospital. I hope I feel better tomorrow as I can't do anything for now. I want to be better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want you guys to take care of your health.
Best wishes for a quick recovery
Bob
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