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Day off Yesterday, I spent my day off on the beach with my girlfriend and our dog. We live in Florence, a town that appears beautiful to those come as tourist, but for us living here sometimes is really annoying. In this period Florence is full of tourists, and walking around is really a mess. So, we decided to take the car and go to listen the sound of the waves and feel the sensation of the sand under our feet. It was really chill and relaxing, the perfect way to exape from the noise of the city!

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Day Off

Yesterday, I spent my day off on the beach with my girlfriend and our dog. We live in Florence, a town that appears {better: looks} beautiful to those who come as a tourist, but for us living here, it is sometimes is really annoying.* In this period,** Florence is full of tourists, and walking around is really a mess. So, we decided to take the car and go to listen to*** the sound of the waves and feel the sensation of the sand under our feet.
It was really chill and relaxing, the perfect way to escape from the noise of the city!


*Better: "but for those of us who live here, it can be really annoying sometimes."

**Better: "During this time..."

***We "listen to" things (listen to the radio, listen to my mother, listen to the weather forecast, etc.)

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