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JUST A DIARY ON Apr.5th (writing about my favorite characters) I want someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ON Apr.5th I am to discribe about my favorite character. I have some charactors that liking since I was in childwood with me. To say in just one word, "Pokemon". I believe that they know them and play its video games at least once time, but I am to tell you about Pokemon just in case. Well...It's kind of disney charactor in America. As American people, of course also people over the world but the United State, love disney charactors, Japanese people loves characers in Pokemon a lot. When I was in an elementary school, I had lived for playing its videogame after school. What kind of point of them charm people? In my view, as Pokemon have tons of characters. Even in first work, 151 characters appear. Other contries has no anything as appear tons of characters in just one work, like pokemon. And other reason is; it's made for adult not only for child. Well, I'm pround of it, as the headquater of Nintendo in in my area and All people are into and go crazy over it. Do you remember we all were under crazy situation, yeah as you know, Pokemon GO. Maybe, It has still continued this passion, however when this app release out the world, people in the world go off theirs house and enjoy it acloss the places. It would really surpised me...(That's it) By the way, I have a question for you... Do you mind if tell me another word for "favorite",please? I usually this word" favorite" when I want you to tell my favorite thing. But I heard from someone that English speaker doesn't like to hear same word a lot of times. So I would like to know another way of saying" favorite". Thanks.

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I am about to describe about my favorite character.

I have some characters that I liked since I was in my childhood with me.

To say it in just one word, "Pokemon".

I believe that most people they know them and have played its these video games at least once time. But I am to will tell you about Pokemon just in case.

Well...It's kind of like Disney characters in America. As American people, and others all of course also people over the world but the United State, love Disney characters.

Japanese people loves characters in from Pokemon a lot. When I was in an elementary school, I had lived for playing its video games after school.


Sorry I did the other part but had to do it in two bits due to its length but my computer crashed....

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