One Day
Good Morning every one!
Today is a Holiday here in Marilia.
Marilia is the small city in interior of state São Paulo in Brazil, where i living.
Today is a beautiful day of autumn. And I stay relaxing study english and listening to musics of my favorite rock band; Guns n Roses.
And you? What do you think of my text?
Peace,
Nina
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One Day
Good Morning every one!Today is a holiday here in Marilia.
Marilia is a small city in the interior state of São Paulo in Brazil where I live.
Today is a beautiful autumn day, and I am relaxing, studying English (proper nouns are always capitalized), and listening to the music of my favorite rock band: Guns n Roses.
(When you end a sentence and want to join an additional clause, you can use a comma and coordinating conjunction or avoid using a conjunction at the beginning of a sentence. Coordinating conjunctions are called FANBOY: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)
And you? What do you think of my text?
Peace,
Nina
Hey Nina! It sounds like you are having a wonderful day! Muito bom!
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Hello Mắt thanks for your attention, is very important for me in my studies. Peace!
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Hello Nina,
Wish you have a great Holiday.
I very love your country and your country festivals.
I think your text is OK, just a point is: "where I am living" .
Thank you!
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