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Aranxa Martinez was born on March 10th 1986 and she was born in Mexico City. When she graduated from at college she looked for a job in a communications company, there she fell in love with a man and after a long time together, they had a baby called Regina.
She’s lived in a beautiful house for 5 years with her new family. Actually, she has worked at works in a media agency for 3 years and in/on her free time she likes going to the movies or reading reads some books for with her daughter. She is really happy now.
I think her she has a good life because she’s made her dreams reality and has a great family which supports her in everything.

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Is this text ok? I need some help jaja please

Aranxa Martinez was born on March 10th 1986, she was born in Mexico City. When she graduated from college she looked for a job in a communications company. There she fell in love with a man and after a long time together, they had a baby called Regina.
She’s lived in a beautiful house for 5 years with her new family. Actually, she's been working in a media agency for 3 years and in her free time she likes going to the movies or reading some books for her daughter. She is really happy now.
I think she has a good life because she’s made her dreams reality and has a great family which supports her in everything.

Is this text ok? I need some help jaja please

Aranxa Martinez was born on March 10th 1986 and she was born in Mexico City. when she graduated at college she looked for a job in a communication company,  .there she fell in love with a man and after a long time together, they had a baby called Regina.
She’s lived in a beautiful house for 5 years with her new family. Actually she works in a media agency for 3 years and in her free time she likes going to the movies or reads some books for her daughter. She is really happy now.
I think her  she has a good life because she’s made her dreams reality and has a great family which that support supports her in everything.

Hi, Aranxa. You are already good in english. You just have to be  more careful in writing long sentences. You can break them down into shorter sentences with periods. :)