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First notebook entry: Introducing myself most of people in school learned english, but for me , i learned japanese, everyone knows that english is national language now, if you can not speak english you can not make a conversation with foreigner and seconly, i want a better job, but if you can not speak english ,it will limited you to find a good job,

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

most of people in school learned english, but for me , i learned japanese,
Most* of the people in school learned English*, but I* learned Japanese*. **

everyone knows that english is national language now, if you can not*** speak english you can not*** make a conversation with foreigner
Everyone* knows that English* is an international language now, if you cannot speak English* you cannot have a conversation with foreigners. **

and seconly, i want a better job, but if you can not speak english ,it will limited you to find a good job,
Secondly*, I want a better job. If you cannot speak English*, it limits your ability to find a good job. **

*This is a capitalization rule in the English languages. Important pronouns must have the first letter in the word capitalized. Some examples of words that should be capitalized include - names, days of the week, months, holidays, languages, countries, etc. Additionally, the first letter of every new sentence should be capitalized. 

** This deals with punctuation. You keep using the comma ( , ) instead of a period ( . ). A comma ( , ) is used to break up two like clauses (ideas) and creates a "pause" in the sentence. A period ( . ) marks the end of a clause (idea) and separates it from a new one. Remember that after periods ( . ) the next word should have its first letter capitalized. 

*** This is a conjunction, can not becomes cannot in the English language. Other examples are: are not = aren't, do not = don't, should not = shouldn't. 

Other things can't really be detailed unless you got a formal session with an italki member :). 

Hope comments help you! :)

Eryca Rockwell
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Most  people in school learned english, but for me , I learned Japanese.
Everyone knows that english is national language now, If you can't speak english you can't have a conversation with a foreigner.

Secondly, I want a better job, but if you can't speak english , it will limit your choices of finding a good job.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

most of the people in school learned english, but for me , i learned japanese,
everyone knows that english is a national language now, if you can not speak english you can not make conversation with a foreigner. 

and secondly, i want a better job, but if you can not speak english ,it will limit you to find a good job.

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