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i wrote one report about how to improve our social club, who could check it?
REPORT ON SOCIAL CLUB INNOVATIONIntroduction
The purpose of this report is to suggest how our social club could be improved. there are two ways to improve the building.
Forniture Furniture and interior design
The walls and the floors of the rooms are dull, they seem really old and they need to be renovated with bright colours. The studying rooms are always empty, I think it is because there aren’t too many electrical outlets, I'd suggest to putting them under each table, in this way students can would be able to study in peaceful without worrying about the PCs' charge.
Games space (Have you forgotten to press the break key?)
In the current social club there aren’t isn't any games equipment. A good social club needs to have one big game gaming space, where students can could spend their free time instead of staying at home. I'd suggest to buying somethings like a pool table or football table. In addition, it would be a good idea adding to add some chairs and tables there.
Conclusion
The recommendations (You have recommended more than one thing) above would, I believe (This sounds a bit strange, putting "I believe at the beginning "I believe that the recommendations..." would sounds much more natural, or even replacing "I believe" with "in my opinion" would make it sound more natural), make the social club more attractive for all students. These recommendations would encourage students to stay out of their houses and to (No need to put another "to" as it is obvious from the previous clause, this extra "to" just make it sounds a bit out of place but is not a mistake) spend more time with each other.
**This is quite well written, good luck with your English studies!
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