一些句子！ 可以查一查吗？
1）上个会议的总结有很多优点。
2) 他习惯证明他的看法。
3）只要一津力，你就要成功。
4) 打主意的时候，他每次指他的第六感。
5）我觉得新买的笔记本是值得。
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一些句子！ 可以查一查吗？
1）上个会议的总结有很多优点。Since the conclusion of the meeting is inanimate, not a living thing, it sounds more natural to me if you replace 有很多優點 with an adjective. For example you can say, 上個會議的總結很好。2) 他习惯证明他的看法。Alright!
3）只要一You don't need 一 here. If you use 一 in this sentence, you mean you will succeed ONCE you START being hard working, regardless of how long you work hard. Doesn't matter if you are only hard working for 5 minutes because you are going to succeed the second you start being hard working.津力盡力(I guess you made a typo here)，你就要會If you use 要, it means "You must succeed" (an order). 會 means "will", indicating possibility.成功。
4) 打主意思考Usually we say someone HAS (有) a 主意, and ask if someone HAS any 主意, but we don't THINK of 主意. 的时候，他每次都We need 都 here because of 每次. 每次 always come with 都, so "每次都".指依賴I guess you mean rely on his sixth sense? 他的第六感。
5）我觉得新买的笔记本是We don't need copula verbs/intensive verbs (to be 是) in sentences like this. This sentence pattern is subject+be+adjective in English. But in Chinese we don't need the verb. Instead, we insert 很 before the adjective. You must have read this example sentence if you learn Mandarin: 我很快樂 (I am happy.). In the Chinese sentence, "am" is omitted. 值得很划算。worth-buying=划算
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我卸了一些句子！ 可以帮我检查一下吗？
1）上个会议的总结有很多优点。2) 他习惯证明他的看法。
3）功夫不负有心人。
4) 拿定主意的时候，他每次都靠他的第六感。
5）我觉得新买的笔记本挺划算的。
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