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A story If had somebody told me about that night, I hadn´t believed at all. It was such a stormy night, the street lamps were off because the strong storm. Despite the rain, there was a man stayed behind an old tree. Sometimes the lightning showed the man´s face, a scary face without a sigh of kindness. What was waiting the man for or to whom? He looked the house at the end of the street , finally the lights into the house went off and the man went forward to the house, he was also expecting a signal, because suddenly from the house came a little blue light, and him didn´t need any more to know what had to do. A few minutes later the man was climbing the wall. Using a rope in a complete silence he was able to break into the house. Breathing heavily the stopped to look up into his pockets, his naked face sweated, grabbed something like a mask and put it on his face. Next to him there was a room without hesitation opened the door. Having been waiting so long in the rain, his clothes was completely soaked besides his shoes made an upsetting noise, the man didn´t want to wake up the woman. What the hell! said the man while was sinking the knife through the warm throat, the blood was like a river, him should have imagined that would happen, He was terrified , but there was no point in thinking about, don´t look back. The newspapers showed the following morning a rich man accused of murder, a woman ,who lived opposite to him, called the police the night before when witnessed something mysterious, he and the nurse who looked after the woman is said were involved.

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A story

If had somebody had told me about that night, I wouldn't have believed at all.
It was such a stormy night, the street lamps were off because of the strong storm.
Despite the rain, there was a man who was behind an old tree. Sometimes the lightning showed the man´s face, a scary face without any sign of kindness.
What was waiting the man for or for whom?
He looked at the house at the end of the street , finally the lights in the house went off and the man went into the house. He was also expecting a signal because suddenly little blue light came from the house and he knew what he had to do. didn´t need any more to know what he had to do.
A few minutes later the man was climbing up the wall. Using a rope in a complete silence he was able to break into the house. Breathing heavily the stopped to look up into his pockets, his naked face was sweating sweated.  He grabbed something like a mask and put it on his face. Next to him there was a room and without hesitation opened the door.
Having waited been waiting so long in the rain, his clothes were was completely soaked and besides his shoes made an upsetting noise.  The man didn´t want to wake up the woman up. What the hell! said the man while he was sinking the knife through the (woman's) warm throat; the blood was like a river, he should have imagined that would happen, He was terrified, but there was no point in thinking about now, don´t look back.
The following morning the newspapers reported showed the following morning a rich man accused of the murder. A woman who lived opposite him called the police the night before when witnessing something mysterious, he and the nurse who looked after the woman were said to be were involved.
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A story

If had somebody told me about that night, I hadn´t believed at all. > If someone did not tell me what happened that night, I would not  believed it at all.> If someone hadn't told me about that night, I would not have believed it at all.
It happened on a very such a stormy night, and the street lamps were out because of the strong storm.
Despite the rain, there was this strange-looking man standing stayed behind an old tree. Sometimes, the lightning illuminated/ showed the man´s face, a scary face devoid of any hint of kindness/  without a sign of kindness.
Who was waiting the man waiting for and for what? or to whom?
He was just standing there observing/looked/ the house at the end of the street, and when all the lights in the house were finally switched off,  out the lights into the house went off and the man he approached went forward to the house, but only after seeing what was to be the signal: a little blue light shining out off the house. he was also expecting a signal, because suddenly from the house came a little blue light  And from then on, he knew what he had to do. and him didn´t need any more to know what had to do.
A few minutes later, the man was trying to climb a wall.climbing the wall. Using a rope and in a complete silence, he eventually broke was able to break into the house. Breathing heavily, he stopped look up into his pockets. His face was sweating as he is naked face sweated  grabbed something like a mask and put it on.  his face. There was a room next to him, and there was a room without any hesitation, he opened the door.
After having waited been waiting so long in the rain for so long, his clothes were was completely soaked now, and besides his wet shoes were making squeaking noises, making made an upsetting noise He didn´t want to wake up the woman in the room. "What the hell!" said exclaimed the man later as he sank  was he a knife into her throat. through the warm throat, the Blood came gushing out was like a river, which of course was something he had expected to him should have imagined that would happen. He was terrified, but there was no point in thinking too much about it, for there was not turning back now. don´t look back.
The newspapers showed The following morning, the newspapers reported that a rich man had been accused of murder, and a woman, who lived opposite (to) him, had called the police the night before, when she saw something mysterious; and that the rich man and the nurse who looked after the woman is said were involved.

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