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Beauty contests Beauty contests - it's a beautiful show, which has advantages and disadvantages for the participants. I think that to take part in a beauty contest is very difficult. It’s need a lot of work on yourself. You need to be in good physical shape, spending a lot of time in the gym, you eat a little, work on his gait, over his own body, manners and gestures, to follow the skin. This is a very stressful job and takes a lot of time. Many girls break down midway and not reach the end. Every girl wants to win, but in the end many disappointed if not to take first place. I don’t believe that beauty contests are carried out honestly. I think that many people con others, spoil clothes, shoes, hairstyle, face and other things. Many judges bribed and they don't vote the way they want and do what they say. I think the victory depends on money and connections, not from the beauty and talents of participants. Of course, there are several advantages for those who want to pursue a career in modeling. Some girls after the contest to get a variety of offers from modeling agencies, they will have the opportunity to travel the world. The other girls can change the personal life and successful marriage. I would never want to participate in a beauty contest, because I don't believe in honesty of this contest.

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Beauty contests 

Beauty contests - it's a beautiful show, which has advantages and disadvantages for the participants.
I think that to takeing part in a beauty contest is very difficult. It’s need a lot of work on yourself stressful on your mind and body. You need to be in good physical shape, spending a lot of time in the gym, you eat a little, work on his your gait, over his own body [same as going to the gym], master the required etiquette manners and gestures, to follow the skin. This is a very stressful job and takes a lot of time.
Many girls break down midway and do not reach the end.
Every girl wants to win, but in the end many disappointed if not to take first place only one person can take the first place, leading to disappointment for the others.


I don’t believe that beauty contests are carried out honestly. I think that many people con  trick others, spoil clothes, shoes, hairstyle, face and other things. Many judges are bribed and they don't vote honestly the way they want and but instead follow the money do what they say. I think the victory depends on money and connections, not from the beauty and talents of participants.
Of course, there are several advantages for those who want to pursue a career in modeling. Some girls after the contest to get a variety of offers from modeling agencies, they will have the opportunity to travel the world. Even if they don't, they The other girls can change their personal life for the better and might have a successful marriage.
I would never want to participate in a beauty contest, because I don't believe in honesty of this contest.

Great work Olga! 

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Beauty contests

Beauty contests - it's a beautiful show, which has advantages and disadvantages for the participants.
I think that to take taking part in a beauty contest is very difficult. It’s need requires a lot of work on yourself. You need to be in a good physical shape, spending a lot of time in the a gym, you eat a little, work on his your gait, over his own body, manners and gestures, to follow maintain the  your skin. This is a very stressful job and takes a lot of time.
Many girls break down midway and do not reach the end.
Every girl wants to win, but in the end many are disappointed if they do not to take the first place.
I don’t believe that beauty contests are carried out honestly. I think that many people con others, spoil clothes, shoes, hairstyle,  or face and other things. Many judges are bribed and they don't vote the way they want, and do what they say were told to do. I think the victory depends on money and connections, not from  on the beauty and talents of participants.
Of course, there are several advantages for those who want to pursue a career in modelling. Some girls after the contest to get a variety of offers from modeling modelling agencies after the contest, andthey will have the opportunity to travel the world. The other Other girls can change the their personal life and have a successful marriage. 

I would never want to participate in a beauty contest, because I don't believe in honesty of this contest.

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How many absolutely fair things are there on the earth? But we have to accept it, don't we?

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