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Conversation about hobby M : Hello H : Hi. What your name ? M : My name is Manh. And you ? H : My name is Huy M : How are you ? H : I'm fine thank you . And you ? M : I'm so so . What do you often do in your free time ? H : I'm often playing game M : what do you like play game ? H : I'm playing game League of Legends M : Oh.This game I also love to play M : Do you want playing game with me now? H : Yes.We let's go

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Conversation about hobby

M : Hello.
H : Hi. What's your name?
M : My name is Manh. And you?
H : My name is Huy.
M : How are you?
H : I'm fine thank you. And you?
M : I'm so so. What do you often do in your free time?
H : I often play a game.
M : Which game do you like to play?
H : I'm currently playing League of Legends.
M : Oh. I like to play that game too.
M : Do you want to play that game with me now?
H : Yes.We let's go!

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Hi, Béoo,

   This was a very nice conversation. Here are some notes:

- You often used the Present Continuous verb, 'I'm playing'. Since the two people are talking about playing games in general, instead you can use Present Simple: 'I play'. 'I often play a game' means I play games a lot, but I'm not playing a game right now.

Using 'currently' has a similar meaning: I'm playing League of Legends, but not right this second.

English likes to keep Subject + Verb + Object. So 'This game I also love to play' (Object + Subject + Verb) changes to 'I like to play that game too.'

You also don't need to put a space between the punctuation: Instead of Hello . you can write Hello.

I hope that helps! Let me know if you have any questions.

Best,

Julie

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